Refer to "Pitney Bowes: Employer Health Strategy."In a paper of 750-1,000 words, address the following:Why was Pitney Bowes spending so much on employee health at a time when most organizations were c

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70.0 %Content

 

15.0 %Pitney Bowes Expenditure Analysis on Employee Health

No employee expenditure analysis is present. 

Employee expenditure analysis is incomplete or omits some requirements stated in the assignment criteria.

Employee expenditure analysis is somewhat inaccurate or partially relevant. Research is inadequate in relevance, quality, or correctness.

Employee expenditure analysis is accurate. Research is adequate, current, and relevant, and addresses all issues stated in the assignment criteria.

Employee expenditure analysis is comprehensive, accurate, and clearly provides purpose and facts. Research is adequate, current, and relevant, and addresses all issues stated in the assignment criteria.

15.0 %Pitney Bowes Health and Wellness Programs

No information regarding the health and wellness programs at Pitney Bowes is present. 

Information regarding the health and wellness programs at Pitney Bowes is incomplete or omits some requirements stated in the assignment.

Information regarding the health and wellness programs at Pitney Bowes is complete, but is somewhat inaccurate or partially relevant. 

Information regarding the health and wellness programs at Pitney Bowes is complete, accurate, or relevant. 

Information regarding the health and wellness programs at Pitney Bowes is comprehensive, accurate, and explained in detail.

20.0 %Evaluation of the Approach of the Company to Health Plans and Pharmacy Benefits 

No evaluation of the approach of the company to health plans and pharmacy benefits is present.

Evaluation of the approach of the company to health plans and pharmacy benefits is incomplete or omits some requirements stated in the assignment.

Evaluation of the approach of the company to health plans and pharmacy benefits is complete, but is somewhat inaccurate or partially relevant.

Evaluation of the approach of the company to health plans and pharmacy benefits is complete, accurate, and relevant.

Evaluation of the approach of the company to health plans and pharmacy benefits is comprehensive, accurate, and explained in detail. 

20.0 %Personal Approach to Improvement of the Plan of the Company 

No personal approach to improvement of the plan of the company is present. 

Personal approach to improvement of the plan of the company is incomplete or omits some requirements stated in the assignment.

Personal approach to improvement of the plan of the company is complete, but is somewhat inaccurate or partially relevant.

Personal approach to improvement of the plan of the company is complete, accurate, and relevant. Approach includes challenges or constraints that must be addressed. 

Personal approach to improvement of the plan of the company is comprehensive, accurate, and explained in detail. Approach includes detailed explanation of challenges or constraints that must be addressed.

20.0 %Organization and Effectiveness 

 

7.0 %Thesis Development and Purpose

Paper lacks any discernible overall purpose or organizing claim.

Thesis is insufficiently developed or vague. Purpose is not clear.

Thesis is apparent and appropriate to purpose.

Thesis is clear and forecasts the development of the paper. Thesis is descriptive and reflective of the arguments and appropriate to the purpose.

Thesis is comprehensive and contains the essence of the paper. Thesis statement makes the purpose of the paper clear.

20.0 %Organization and Effectiveness 

 

8.0 %Argument Logic and Construction

Statement of purpose is not justified by the conclusion. The conclusion does not support the claim made. Argument is incoherent and uses noncredible sources.

Sufficient justification of claims is lacking. Argument lacks consistent unity. There are obvious flaws in the logic. Some sources have questionable credibility.

Argument is orderly, but may have a few inconsistencies. The argument presents minimal justification of claims. Argument logically, but not thoroughly, supports the purpose. Sources used are credible. Introduction and conclusion bracket the thesis. 

Argument shows logical progressions. Techniques of argumentation are evident. There is a smooth progression of claims from introduction to conclusion. Most sources are authoritative.

Clear and convincing argument that presents a persuasive claim in a distinctive and compelling manner. All sources are authoritative.

20.0 %Organization and Effectiveness 

 

5.0 %Mechanics of Writing (includes spelling, punctuation, grammar, language use)

Surface errors are pervasive enough that they impede communication of meaning. Inappropriate word choice or sentence construction is used.

Frequent and repetitive mechanical errors distract the reader. Inconsistencies in language choice (register) or word choice are present. Sentence structure is correct but not varied.

Some mechanical errors or typos are present, but they are not overly distracting to the reader. Correct and varied sentence structure and audience-appropriate language are employed.

Prose is largely free of mechanical errors, although a few may be present. The writer uses a variety of effective sentence structures and figures of speech.

Writer is clearly in command of standard, written, academic English.

10.0 %Format

 

5.0 %Paper Format (use of appropriate style for the major and assignment)

Template is not used appropriately or documentation format is rarely followed correctly.

Appropriate template is used, but some elements are missing or mistaken. A lack of control with formatting is apparent.

Appropriate template is used. Formatting is correct, although some minor errors may be present. 

Appropriate template is fully used. There are virtually no errors in formatting style.

All format elements are correct. 

5.0 %Documentation of Sources (citations, footnotes, references, bibliography, etc., as appropriate to assignment and style)

Sources are not documented.

Documentation of sources is inconsistent or incorrect, as appropriate to assignment and style, with numerous formatting errors.

Sources are documented, as appropriate to assignment and style, although some formatting errors may be present.

Sources are documented, as appropriate to assignment and style, and format is mostly correct. 

Sources are completely and correctly documented, as appropriate to assignment and style, and format is free of error.

100 %Total Weightage

 


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