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PEER REVIEW FORM

Answer the questions briefly but specifically – please use a different font or color that makes your comments easily identifiable by the author you are reviewing. When you have finished filling out the form, post it to the discussion thread.

Name of Peer reviewer:

Name of paper author:

Paper title:

1. Thesis.

Copy and paste the thesis of the paper below. If you can’t find it briefly describe what you think it might be.

Does it clearly state the writer’s purpose for the paper?

Does it set the stage for the remainder of the paper?

How could it be improved in terms of stating the writer’s position or point-of-view?

Where is the thesis statement in the paper ... at the beginning? at the end? Is this positioning effective in terms of preparing the reader for what is to follow?

2. Introduction:

Does the introduction provide some general background regarding the topic of the paper?

Does the introduction make you want to keep reading? Why or why not?

By the end of the introduction do you know the purpose of the paper and how the author intends to address that purpose?

3. Introduction: Follow-through.

Having read the rest of the paper, did you find that the introduction gave you a good idea of what the author actually did address in the rest of the paper?

If not, what is the main point of the paper? Is there a main point?

4. Introduction & Conclusion.

Think about the relationship between the introduction and conclusion. Does the conclusion logically connect to the introduction and thesis statement? How?

Is it a successful conclusion in that it offers closure to the paper while emphasizing the main thesis strongly one last time?

5. Strategies of Development.

Is the paper logically organized into separate sections with headings that represent the major and minor points of the argument?

Are the sections of the paper organized into a logical sequence which supports the thesis statement?

What strategies of development do you see the author using on the paragraph level or in the paper as a whole? Which are the most successful?