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Critical analysis of this article shows that the author aim is to bring out the relevance of education. He/she does this through a reflection of his personal life. Through the words of his/her coworker at the factory, he/she is made to believe that life without education is difficult. For instance, he/she is told that "This job pays well, but its hell on the body," said one co-worker. "Study hard and keep reading," she added, nodding at the copy of Jack Kerouac's,' (Braaksma, 2005). This is a quote of the conversation between various employees of the company. This conversation makes him/her work hard in order to have an easy life later on.

The author deploys various techniques in order to achieve his goal. Various instances in the factory are just one of the way in which he/she tries to portray how life without education can be difficult. For instance, individuals without an education do not get permanent jobs. Besides that, they are forced to work for long hours but they only receive little peanuts as their salary.

My audience that is going to read this work is my professor. He is bound to face a lot of challenges when he reads this work. For instance, I have only highlighted a few instances to highlight the author`s claim. Secondly, it will be difficult for the professor to determine if the author is either a man or a woman since I have used pronouns he/she in reference to the author.

Am in agreement with the author`s goal that education is very important in today`s world. It's clear that in contemporary social life is very difficult for the individuals that have little education. This is because these people are mainly using their strength to earn their daily living which in most cases is usually little amount. As they are employed as casuals in the company, work under harsh conditions with little or no protective gears, and receive little payment. Therefore, the author`s claim is evident in contemporary society which makes me agree with him/her.

This opinion can easily be justified in both cases. For instance, in the article people with little education work more and receive little income as the author states that, "After a particularly exhausting string of 12-hour days at a plastics factory, I remember being shocked at how small my check seemed," (Braaksma, 2005). However, in real life most educated people in the society earn a lot yet they work the shortest time possible. As such, am in agreement that life without education is usually difficult.

In order to ensure that there is an improvement in the feedback from the third parties, I will employ the use of various techniques. I will first use the simplest language in the essay for easy understanding and issuance of feedback. I will also be precise and clear to the point to avoid repetition and boring the readers. Lastly, I intend to use the feedback for the benefit of ensuring that I improve on the final project, this is through consideration of the comments and critics made on my essay.

Lastly, for the purpose of revision, I will employ the use of peer-reviewed strategy. This is because when my course mates read the essay they shall be able to identify mistakes easily that I would have not identified despite reading several times. Besides that, they might also read and comment on my essay which would help me to incorporate into the essay thus making it a better essay.

Reference

Braaksma, A. (2005). Some Lessons from the Assembly Line. Newsweek, 146(11), 17.