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Dear professor

I send you this with all hope that you understand my situation, which relates to my acceptance to study master in Exercise and Health Sciences M.S. I came here with my wife and my kids holding visa F-2 and before that I was in Colorado as a student in Academic English program. I studied English for one and a half year starting from 10/12/2015 to 04/28/2017. Since the day I came to the US, I want to study in UHCL and more specific in Exercise and Health Sciences consideration in Public Health, but you know sometimes thing doesn't go as we plan for it. I faced many problems, one of them is my wife's classes are always in the evening and she is a student in UHCL, so it is hard to have classes in the same time who ganna take care of our children. Now, this is the last year for my wife and it’s the last chance for me to study because SCAM where I got full scholarship from them to me and my wife and they will not allow one of us to study if the other is the last semester for him or her. Secondly, I got 5.5 in IELTS and the University just waived the IELTS from the student who studied in ESL program, for me I got 5.5 which is very close to 6 and in addition I completed Academic English Program from Colorado State University. The problem for me in the IELTS is that I am a slower writer. Furthermore, I was an employer and I chose to quit my job to come here and study and it will be disappointment to return without a degree. I have experience in Health Sciences, and I promise you if just give me the chance I will prove you that I deserve it and I'll work hard. I came to your office two time, but I didn't find you. I also went to the international admission, but they refused to submit my application until I get 6 in IELTS even though my application.