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I a m so h appy to s e e th at y o u a ls o c o nsu lt e d A borig in al lit e ra tu re ( w rit te n b y a n A borig in al re se arc h er) to s u pport y o ur d is cu ssio n in r e la tio n to th e o ppre ssio n a nd lib era tio n o f Aborig in al p eople . T his is a M UST s o to m in im is e fu rth er o ppre ssio n o f g ra ssro ots a nd Aborig in al v o ic e s, a s y o u s o e lo quently s ta te d w it h in y o ur p aper a s w ell. C ongra ts , Rach ael. Best w is h es fo r y o ur s tu die s a nd m any s o cia l ju stic e in vo lv e m ents :) Nic ky Rese arc h : 1 0 C onte nt: 1 0 S tr u ctu re : 9 RUBR IC : C SA C RIT IC AL R EVIE W RESEAR CH FA IL (4 ) PASS (6 ) CRED IT (7 ) DIS TIN CTIO N (8 ) HIG H D IS TIN CTIO N (1 0) CO NTE N T FA IL (4 ) PASS (6 ) CRED IT (7 ) DIS TIN CTIO N (8 ) HIG H D IS TIN CTIO N (1 0) ORG AN IS ATIO N FA IL 28 / 3 0 10 / 1 0 1. N o r e le va nt r e se arc h 2 . N o u nders ta ndin g o f th e fr a m ew ork s in th e le ctu re s, w ork sh ops and R eco m mended R eadin gs a nd R eso urc e s in to th e C rit ic a l R evie w . 3 . R ese arc h h as not b een u se d to d eve lo p a rg um ent/s u pport k e y p oin ts .
1. M in im al r e se arc h 2 M in im al u nders ta ndin g o r in co rp ora tio n o f th e fr a m ew ork s in th e le ctu re s, w ork sh ops a nd R eco m mended R eadin gs a nd R eso urc e s in to th e C rit ic a l Revie w . 3 . H as a tte m pte d to u se r e se arc h to d eve lo p a rg um ent/s u pport k e y p oin ts .
1. H as r e se arc h ed c a re fu lly .
2. H as in co rp ora te d a nd u tilis e d th e fr a m ew ork s in th e le ctu re s, w ork sh ops a nd R eco m mended R eadin gs a nd R eso urc e s in to th e C rit ic a l Revie w . 3 . H as a tte m pte d to u se r e se arc h to d eve lo p th e m ajo rit y o f th e arg um ent/s u pport k e y p oin ts .
1. H as r e se arc h ed w id ely , c a re fu lly a nd c re ativ e ly . 2 . C rit ic a lly in co rp ora te d a nd u tilis e d th e fr a m ew ork s in th e le ctu re s, w ork sh ops a nd R eco m mended R eadin gs a nd R eso urc e s in to th e C rit ic a l R evie w . 3 . R ese arc h h as b een u se d to c rit ic a lly d eve lo p arg um ent/s u pport k e y p oin ts .
1. H as r e se arc h ed w id ely , c a re fu lly a nd c re ativ e ly 2 . C rit ic a lly in co rp ora te d a nd u tilis e d th e fr a m ew ork s in th e le ctu re s, w ork sh ops a nd R eco m mended R eadin gs a nd R eso urc e s in to th e C rit ic a l R evie w . 3 . R ese arc h h as b een u se d to c rit ic a lly & c o nvin cin gly d eve lo p arg um ent/s u pport k e y p oin ts .
10 / 1 0 1. H as n ot a nsw ere d th e q uestio ns. 2 . H as n ot lin ke d F re ir e ’s th eory to o ur o w n w ork .
1. H as a tte m pte d to a nsw er th e q uestio ns. 2 . H as a tte m pte d to m ake th e lin k b etw een Fre ir e ’s th eory a nd a pplic a tio n to o ur o w n w ork .
1. H as a nsw ere d th e q uestio ns, a nd c le arly in tr o duce d & c rit ic a lly e ngaged w it h r e le va nt id eas fr o m F re ir e ’s w ork . 2 . H as a tte m pte d to c rit ic a lly a nd c o nvin cin gly m ake th e lin k betw een F re ir e ’s th eory a nd a pplic a tio n to o ur o w n w ork .
1. H as a nsw ere d th e q uestio ns, a nd c le arly in tr o duce d & c rit ic a lly e ngaged w it h r e le va nt id eas fr o m F re ir e ’s w ork . 2 . H as c rit ic a lly a nd c o nvin cin gly m ade th e lin k b etw een F re ir e ’s th eory a nd a pplic a tio n to o ur o w n w ork .
1. H as a nsw ere d th e q uestio ns, a nd c le arly in tr o duce d & c rit ic a lly e ngaged w it h r e le va nt id eas fr o m F re ir e ’s w ork . 2 . H as c rit ic a lly a nd c o nvin cin gly m ade th e lin k b etw een F re ir e ’s th eory a nd a pplic a tio n to o ur o w n w ork .
8 / 1 0 1. H as w rit te n a n u nsa tis fa cto ry C rit ic a l R evie w .
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3. P oorly w rit te n 4. (4 ) PASS (6 ) CRED IT (7 ) DIS TIN CTIO N (8 ) HIG H D IS TIN CTIO N (1 0) No o r m in im al r e fe re nce lis t.
1. H as w rit te n a s a tis fa cto ry C rit ic a l R evie w . 2 . H as a tte m pte d to s tr u ctu re c a re fu lly a nd arra nge p oin ts lo gic a lly 3. Is w rit te n in a s a tis fa cto ry m anner. 4 . H as p ro vid ed a r e fe re nce lis t 1. H as w rit te n a s o lid C rit ic a l R evie w . 2 . H as c le arly in tr o duce d th e R evie w , s tr u ctu re d ca re fu lly a nd a rra nged p oin ts lo gic a lly 3. Is w ell w rit te n w it h in th e 9 00-w ord lim it 4 . H as pro vid ed a r e fe re nce lis t w it h m in im al m is ta ke s, u tilis in g H arv a rd s yste m .
1. H as w rit te n a n o uts ta ndin g C rit ic a l R evie w . 2 . H as c le arly in tr o duce d th e R evie w , str u ctu re d c a re fu lly a nd a rra nged p oin ts lo gic a lly 3. Is w ell w rit te n w it h in th e 9 00-w ord lim it 4. H as p ro vid ed a d eta ile d r e fe re nce lis t w it h m in im al m is ta ke s, u tilis in g H arv a rd s yste m .
1. H as w rit te n a n o uts ta ndin g C rit ic a l R evie w . 2 . H as c le arly in tr o duce d th e R evie w , str u ctu re d c a re fu lly a nd a rra nged p oin ts lo gic a lly 3. Is b eautif u lly w rit te n w it h in th e 9 00- word lim it 4 . H as p ro vid ed a d eta ile d r e fe re nce lis t, u tilis in g H arv a rd s yste m .