I am looking for help with a nursing paper for pathophysiology A simple 4 page paper I have attached the grading criteria with the required formatting Topic is Obesity So would include risk factors, B
Beginning 1 | Developing 2 | Accomplished 3 | Exemplary 4 | Score | |
Goal Statement | Incomplete and/or unfocused | States the paper’s purpose in a single sentence | Clearly states the paper’s purpose in a single sentence | Clearly and concisely states the paper’s purpose in a single sentence, which is engaging, and thought provoking | |
Introduction | There is no clear introduction or main topic and the structure of the paper is missing. | States the main topic but does not adequately follow the structure of the paper | States the main topic and follow the structure of the paper. | States the main topic in a engaging manner and follow the structure of the paper. | |
Body | No evidence of structure or organization. | Logical organization; But the association of ideas is not fully developed | Each paragraph has sufficient supporting detail sentences that develop the main idea | Demonstrates logical and subtle sequencing of ideas through well-developed paragraphs; transitions are used to enhance organization | |
Conclusion | Incomplete and/or unfocused. | The conclusion does not adequately restate the thesis. | The conclusion restates the thesis. | The conclusion is engaging and restates the thesis. | |
Citation and Bibliography | Absent or only internet site are cited. | Inconsistencies evident. Few cited works, both are done in the correct format. Done in the correct format with many errors. Includes 3 major references (e.g. science journal articles, books, but no more than two internet sites. | Some cited works are done in the correct format. Done in the correct format with some errors. Includes 4 major references (e.g. science journal articles, books, but no more than two internet sites. | All cited works are done in the correct format with no errors. Done in the correct format with no errors. Includes more than 5 major references (e.g. science journal articles, books, but no more than two internet sites. | |
Grammar and Style | Numerous and distracting errors in sentence structure, punctuation, capitalization and spelling. | Many errors in sentence structure, punctuation, capitalization and spelling. | Almost no errors in sentence structure, punctuation, capitalization and spelling. | No errors in sentence structure, punctuation, capitalization and spelling. |