This is the Essay prepared in the attached files and there is the remarks of the professor regarding the paper written. Can it be fixed according to the instruction.

Remarks of the professor:

Alas, this is a very poor submission and universally deficient at almost every level. For example, your introductory remarks (similar to much of the other content in your essay) make very little sense to me, and there is no genuine indication that you have actually conducted any research - save for the Albo reference and the obvious 'padding' of your 'references' page. Indeed, you have to do more than simply list a few books - you need to cite them and demonstrate an understand of why they are relevant or useful within the context of your own analysis.

As it stands, you have submitted an F paper.