Term Paper Assignment rough draft by Saturday at 5pm Advocacy Paper Topic: Elder Abuse Please read through and make sure you fully understand before you send me a proposal. Thanks.

You have done a fine job on your draft. A few corrections/clarifications:


  1. Page 3: Please add information on what the OAA says about elder abuse and where that information can be found. You are also missing information on the Elder Justice Act which emphasizes parts of your summary and conclusions as well.


  1. There are two incomplete sentences that need to be corrected   p. 8 “I will promote . . .”  and  p. 9 “The legislation of mandatory reporting laws has been delayed . . .



  1. P. 8 – Identify what Section 505 is. What does this apply to? What law is it part of?

 

Once these are addressed, proceed with submission.