no plagarism no high turn in

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Are you speaking to parents? If so, don't use language that sounds like you're talking about them rather than to them. Ex from your submission: 'To keep parental figures instructed in regards...'. Also, torturing and bullying are very different things. Be consistent with your language. Would suggest using 'bullying'.

Newsletter: Cultural Competence: Graphics

Use pictures appropriate for your audience, not just shapes. 0 points

Does not use images to communicate health information to the target audience

8.5 points

Submission has major errors related to citations, grammar, spelling, syntax, or organization that negatively impact readability and articulation of main ideas

Newsletter: Cultural Competence: Language12.75 points

Communicates health information to the target audience but language or design is not audience-appropriate or is not inclusive