Elder Care Settings( Multigenerational Homes) For this writing exercise you will be assigned to research and write about one of four types of eldercare environments/delivery models. You will need to

Poor

15 pts

Fair

30 pts

Good

40 pts

Excellent

50 pts

Content & Development

Poor


- Content is incomplete.
- Major points are not clear and /or persuasive.

Fair


- Content is not comprehensive and /or persuasive.
- Major points are addressed, but not well supported.
- Research is inadequate or does not address the course concepts of the paper- Content is inconsistent with regard to purpose and clarity of thought.

Good


- Content is comprehensive, accurate, and persuasive
- Major points are stated clearly and are well supported
- Research is adequate, timely and addresses course concepts of the paper
- Content and purpose of the writing are clear.

Excellent


Content is thorough, accurate, persuasive and relates to a specific purpose
- Major points are specific, stated clearly, and are well-supported.
- Research is primary
-course concepts of the paper are focused with clear and succinct writing

Quality of research

Poor


Unsatisfactory
--Failed to cite even 1 source
--Sources unreliable.
--Information interferes with ability of reader to understand paper.
--Irrelevant to thesis.
--Information does not support the topic
--Surface research.

Fair


Cited 1-2 sources
--Source reliability questionable.
-Information does not interfere with ability of reader to find the source.
--Some information relevant to thesis.
--Information provided to support some elements of topic
--Surface research.

Good


Cited 2-3 sources
--Sources mostly reliable. Citation errors minor.
--Most information included
--Sufficient information provided
--Research of sufficient depth.

Excellent


-Cited 3 or more sources
--Sources reliable and properly cited.
--All information included
--Sufficient information provided to support all elements of topic.
--Research in-depth and the beyond the obvious, revealing new insights gained.

Organization & Structure

Poor


- Organization and structure detract from the concepts of the paper
- Concepts are disjointed and lack transition of thoughts.

Fair


- Structure of the paragraph is not easy to follow.
- Paragraph transitions need improvement.
- Concepts are disconnected

Good


- Concepts of the paragraphs are clear and easy to follow.

Excellent


-Concepts of paragraphs are filled with details of support for thesis and topic sentences.
- Paragraphs flow into each other with connective concepts.

Format

Poor


- Paper lacks many elements of correct formattting. [APA style]
- Paragraphs are inadequate/excessive in length.
- Too much

Fair


- Paper follows most guidelines.
- Paper is over/ under word length
- Some padding of paragraphs

Good


- Paper follows designated guidelines.
- Paper is the appropriate length as described for the assignment.

Excellent


-Paper follows designated guidelines
[APA style]
-Paper is appropriate in length
-Succinct and scholarly presentation
-websites are cited

Grammar, Punctuation & Spelling

Poor


- Paper contains numerous grammatical, punctuation, and spelling errors.
- Language uses jargon or conversational tone.

Fair


- Paper contains few grammatical, punctuation and spelling errors.
- Language lacks clarity or includes the use of some jargon or conversational tone.

Good


- Rules of grammar, usage, and punctuation are followed; spelling is correct.
- Language is clear; sentences display consistently varied structure.

Excellent


Correct grammatical construction
-free of typos
- compound/complex sentences
-clear, correct technical vocabulary
Strong use of correct language structure.
-Correct punctuation


Elder Care Environment Rubric