I need help with this assignment it is argumentative essay basically a script for me for a video essay I have to do I will record the video obviously but I just need the script and I can send what I h

We adore hate Homelander. The antagonist of The Boys in Amazon kills innocent people, controls his son and still flies to cheering crowds shouting his name. Still, the show continues to pose a disturbing question: why do we continue to watch? Produced by Eric Kripke, The Boys is a satirical superhero series that not only reveals the plot of corporate corruption and uncontrolled power, but also the audience in their participation in maintaining that power by focusing their attention, parasocial bonding, and ignoring the truth. Throughout four seasons, the audience in the show does not care about any evidence of the horrors of heroes, they feed on the propaganda of Vought and applaud murderers because they are entertaining. This trend is similar to the real-life practice of defenders of celebrities, politicians, and influencers when they are proven to have done wrong. It is not merely that influential individuals misuse their platforms, it is that viewers contribute to it by passive viewing and emotional investment. To eliminate this issue, the viewers should follow three practices: first, they will need to be aware of how their attention is a renewable resource of harmful individuals; second, they will have to question the celebrities and social figures that they are idolizing instead of just delivering to them blind loyally; and third, they will have to consciously decide to stop paying attention to content creators and personalities who employ parasocial relationships.

TEACHER FEEDBACK

Jayden,

This introduction is posing an important issue and suggesting powerful solutions. I will say, though, that the paragraph feels overwhelmed with information. How might you edit it so that you will still touch on all of the important components of your argument and yet move into your main "body" much quicker? Good luck!