Power point healthcare assignment
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Please make sure to correct issues and address any recommendations from your instructor's Week 3 Assignment feedback.
You did well in the detail on Part 1 of your Presentation! Please review the attached Week 3 Assignment Grading Rubric that contains comments about meeting the criteria in the directions of the assignment. Some of the issues were that the slides should only 5 bulleted points of 5 to 7 words only. Long sentences on the slide detracts from the presentation. The detail should be in your speaker notes. In addition, I would have liked to see more detail on the stakeholders and their roles. It is important to cover how the stakeholders affected the US Health Care system: the good and the bad. What you have is good, but also look at the negative effects that each stakeholder has had, such as the patient. For example, if the patient were using the ER, which is costlier than seeing a physician, this would drive up health care costs. Another example is the health care providers that are committing fraud, such as billing errors or the more recent issue of diagnosing people with cancer, and treating them with chemo just to make money, (this was in the news in August of 2015 about a doctor in Michigan). Including information on both sides of the coin will illustrate a thorough understanding. It is important to note that our health care system is in its current state due to the positive and negative contributions for each stakeholder. These are just some thoughts for you... 8o) Also, as a reminder, citations need to be included and in correct APA format and if you use quoted material, make sure to place the information in quotation marks, and include the page or paragraph number in the citation as well. You can view the document I uploaded in DocSharing within our classroom. Remember to incorporate the recommendations into your Final paper.
(0.88 / 1) Identifies Themselves and Describes the Nature of the Presentation
Proficient - Identifies themselves and describes the nature of the presentation. Minor details are missing.
You did a nice describing your presentation by giving a brief synopsis of what you will be covering. However, you missed introducing yourself. It is important to not only state your name, but also include information about yourself.
(2 / 2) Describes the History of the US Health Care System
Distinguished - Comprehensively describes the history of the US Health Care System.
You have a solid understanding of how the US Health Care System was developed. Congratulations on comprehensively describing these key elements.
(3 / 3) Identifies Three to Five Major Developments That transformed the System Into What it is Today
Distinguished - Correctly identifies at least three major developments that transformed the system into what it is today.
(2.28 / 3) Differentiates the Stakeholders and Their Roles
Basic - Partially differentiates the stakeholders and their roles by minimally addressing what they have to do within their roles. Relevant details are missing and/or inaccurate.
Good attempt at differentiating the stakeholders, but you needed to include more detail to explain the stakeholders' roles. Each stakeholder has impacted the health care system making it what it is today. Think about how you could have elaborated on their roles by describing the positive and negative contributions.
(0.5 / 0.5) Critical Thinking: Explanation of Issues
Distinguished - Clearly and comprehensively explains the issue to be considered, delivering all relevant information necessary for a full understanding.
(0.44 / 0.5) Critical Thinking: Evidence
Proficient - Employs applicable information from credible sources to develop an analysis of the topic.
(0.44 / 0.5) PowerPoint Presentation: Graphics/Presentation of Information
Proficient - Uses sufficient graphics, sound, and/or animation, which assist in presenting the overall main point and enhance understanding of concepts, ideas, and relationships. There is a consistent theme, format, and font, however, there is too much on the slides. Please see the documents in DocSharing of our classroom for tips on developing scholarly and professional PowerPoints.
(0.44 / 0.5) PowerPoint Presentation: Control of Syntax and Mechanics
Proficient - Displays comprehension and organization of syntax and mechanics, such as spelling and grammar. Written work contains only a few minor errors and is mostly easy to understand.
(0.38 / 0.5) PowerPoint Presentation: APA Formatting
Basic - Exhibits basic knowledge of APA formatting throughout the presentation. The layout does not meet all APA requirements.
(0.25 / 0.25) PowerPoint Presentation: Slide Requirement
Distinguished - The length of the presentation is equivalent to the required number of correctly formatted slides.
(0.19 / 0.25) PowerPoint Presentation: Resource Requirement
Basic - Uses the required number of sources to support ideas, however, the citations are missing so I am unable to determine where the referenced information was used. Citations are missing.
Overall Score: 10.8 / 12
