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Proposal

Many individuals misunderstand what exactly is freedom. What is freedom? Freedom is not about acting without any resistant or barriers, or it is not about the situation of being enslaved. What really does freedom involve? What fascinated me about Mincy article is the way the individual is trying to explain how important it is to be free. It is really important to find internal peace than anything in this world (Mincy). If a person finds peace with themselves the individual would be able to appreciate the little things in life, such as being alive. Freedom is the common word used to try and let the readers know that, it is not wrong for them to break away from their normal lifestyle and relax and find themselves once in a while. There are some of the words that the author seems to use with freedom to emphasis it. The term freedom is used continually with the words free and wild. The words have been used consistently to explain that being free is good for soul and mind. One of the terms that the author tried using in relation to freedom is alive. The author says being alive is an important because it is an opportunity not many individuals in today’s life do appreciate.

Even though, the author insists on freedom, he seems to forget that not every person sees nature as their place of comfort zone in trying to find their internal piece. The world is of diverse individuals and that each person has their own way of being free and wild. What is contradicting about nature being a place of finding freedom and internal piece is that there are a lot of safety challenges, such as being face to face with a bear, like he did experience. So, it is really important if an individual would find their internal peace and live the moment (Mincy).