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TO: Sally Page, CEO

Jackson Norstern, president

FROM: Lynn Fallgastarr, General Manager

DATE: April 15, 20--

SUBJECT: Meeting to Discuss New Satellite Office

Please check your schedule for the week of Sep. 5 to discuss the possible edition of a new satellite office in either Lansing, Michigan or St. Paul, Minnesota, in 20--. In preparation for this meeting, please do the following:

  1. Analyze our balance sheet for the previous fiscal period.

  2. Read the financial reports prepared by our CPA.

  3. Review comments from our current employees.

  4. We would also like you to think about a strategy for strategically moving forward in these difficult economic times.

The edition of a new office for PageNors Investments. Would mean significant risks, but it could also mean increased income for our shareholders. However I believe that now is the apropriate time to consider growth of our company. I am confident that our growth depend on expanding to other neighboring states.

If you have any questions for I in preparation for this meeting please call me to discuss your concerns or questions. I am eager to discuss this issue while.