biology paper

Components

Outstanding

Good

Average

Below Average

Title

2 points

Is descriptive of question and work performed

Includes dependent variable, independent variable and organism studied

Gives a general description of question and work performed

Missing one of the following: dependent variable, independent variable and organism studied

Is present

Missing two of the following: dependent variable, independent variable and organism studied

Not present

Abstract

5 points

States clearly question being asked

Gives hypothesis being tested

Highlights most important findings with enough information to understand experiments

States major findings and conclusions

Is a concise summary of question and findings

Is missing one component of good abstract

Abstract is not well organized or concise.

Is missing two components of a good abstract

Does not give an overview that leads directly to the reader being able to state the major findings of the study

Is missing three or more components of a good abstract

Is not written in a scientific style

Includes references in abstract

Introduction

8 points

Provides the reader with the necessary information to understand the present study

Piques the readers interest and makes the importance of the question real

Gives appropriate information to previous studies that has an impact on the current study

Does not contain superfluous information and/or is not wordy

Gives a description of the specific purpose of the study, a description of the hypothesis being tested and a brief summary of the experimental strategy being used at the end of the introduction

Gives a description of the study system and why it is appropriate to use it to answer hypothesis

Contains some superfluous information

Does not pique the interest of the reader

Is missing some needed background information

Gives too much information--more like a summary

Has all the components of a good introduction but some parts may be difficult to understand

Gives a description of the study system with some comment on its appropriate use

Is missing one or two components of a good introduction

Contains significant superfluous information

Gives a description of the study system

Is missing needed information to understand the present study or is

Is missing a description of the specific purpose of the study, a description of the hypothesis being tested and a brief summary of the experimental strategy being used at the end of the introduction

Contains no information about the study system

Materials and Methods

6 points

Is written in paragraph form

Describes how the experiment was performed with sufficient detail to enable another scientist to repeat the experiment and obtain the same results

Presents easy-to-follow steps which are logical and adequately detailed without including standard procedures that all scientist know how to do

Specific chemicals and equipment are mentioned along with their source (not as a list)

Is written in paragraph form

Describes how the experiment was performed with sufficient detail to enable another scientist to repeat the experiment and obtain the same results

Most steps are understandable but some lack detail or are confusing

Most specific chemicals and equipment are mentioned along with their source (not as a list)

Is written in paragraph form

Describes how the experiment was performed with some critical details are lacking

Most steps are understandable but some lack detail or are confusing

Most specific chemicals and equipment are mentioned along with their source (not as a list)

Is lacking several critical details so that it is impossible to repeat the experiments described

Many steps are missing in describing steps in an experiment

Chemicals and equipment are in a list or are not described

Results

8 points

All pertinent data is described

Raw unprocessed data is absent

Results presented as both narrative text and in figures and tables

Data presented in a logical manner to enable the reader to draw conclusions

Important data is highlighted

No conclusions are present

All tables and figures have appropriate legends

All tables and figures are described in the narrative text

All pertinent data is described

Raw unprocessed data is absent

Most results presented as both narrative text and in figures and tables

Most data presented in a logical manner to enable the reader to draw conclusions

Most important data is highlighted

All tables and figures have appropriate legends

All tables and figures are described in the narrative text

Most pertinent data is described

Raw unprocessed data is absent

Most results presented as both narrative text and in figures and tables

Most data presented in a logical manner to enable the reader to draw conclusions

Most important data is highlighted

Most of the tables and figures have appropriate legends

Most tables and figures are described in the narrative text

Raw unprocessed data is present

Some results presented as both narrative text and in figures and tables

Data not clearly presented 

Important data not highlighted

Data in tables or figures not described in narrative form

Discussion/

Conclusions

8 points

Question and hypothesis restated

Conclusions are stated clearly with explicit reference to the data that support a conclusion

Argument for conclusions well organized

Importance of conclusions discussed

Conclusions related to other studies and put into a context of current knowledge

Clear differentiation between speculations and conclusions

Final paragraph states the major finding of the study (the take home message)

Conclusions are stated clearly with explicit reference to the data that support a conclusion

Argument for conclusions is generally well organized 

Importance of conclusions discussed

Conclusions related to other studies and put into a context of current knowledge

Final paragraph states the major finding of the study (the take home message)

Conclusions are stated clearly with reference to the data that support a conclusion

Argument for the conclusions can be understood but difficult to follow

Final paragraph states the major finding of the study (the take home message)

Conclusions are stated but without sufficient reference to the results that support it.

Lacking several of the characters of a good discussion

References

5 points

All cited sources present

No references not cited in the body present

In the required format

References all highly relevant

All cited sources present

In required format

References relevant and appropriate

Most cited sources present 

Generally in required format

References relevant and appropriate

Many sources absent

Inappropriate format

References not most relevant/appropriate to study

Grammar and mechanics

4 points

Paragraphs well organized

Sections with logical organization of paragraphs (especially introduction, results and conclusions)

Few grammatical errors, typos and misspellings

Appropriate word selection

Correct use of scientific terms

Most paragraphs well organized

Sections with logical organization of paragraphs (especially introduction, results and conclusions)

Several grammatical errors, typos, and misspelling may be present

Some misappropriate word useage errors (effect vs. affect)

Some misuse of scientific terms

Many paragraphs well organized

Several grammatical errors, typos, and misspelling may be present

Paper lacks well organized paragraphs

Sections do not contain information presented in a logical order

Many grammatical errors

Many misappropriate word useage errors (e.g., effect vs. affect)

Many misuses of scientific terms

Format

4 points

All components in the appropriate format

Author name displayed

Latin scientific name italicized with genus capitalized and species in lower case

Paper stapled

Most components of the required format followed

Author name displayed

Paper stapled

An attempt made to follow required format

Author name displayed

Paper stapled

No evidence of required format or

Author name missing

Latin scientific name not italicized

Paper not stapled

Overall Evaluation

45-50 points

40-44 points

35-39 points

0-34 points