Can this be done by 9 tonight

ROUGH DRAFT 5

FICTION PROJECT ROUGH DRAFT

Student’s name: John Blair

Institution: Rasmussen College

Date: May 28, 2017

First Ending

A story of three cats Arianna, Keith and Lady, triplets born to their mother Aqua. Two girls and a boy, as it are expected for a mother to be closer to her son, Aqua took a liking to Keith and soon he was her favorite. Lady and Arianna were often tossed to the curb when they crawled under her for some milk and as for Keith he was allowed anywhere and everywhere. As they grew up it became worse as he had private lessons for fishing tricks and catching mice. Arianna and Lady had to learn on their own from stray cats at the river. From all the pampering Keith added quite some weight and his ego was as big as his belly. He had discovered he was the apple of his mother’s eye and oh didn’t he take advantage of that. He ate from anyone’s plate and displaced his sisters on their beds ever so often. Soon he was calling all the shots and the sisters decided they had had enough. They burnt the midnight oil hatching the perfect plan to get rid of their greedy bossy brother. In the morning, they convinced Keith to go to the river with them for some fish, he had refused but they had insisted that they needed his amazing skills to catch them some good fish. He proudly led the way boasting of his abilities and good looks. The sisters rolled their eyes behind him but agreed with his every word. When they got to the river, they insisted on going to the deepest part as it had the most fish. Keith blindly agreed and no sooner were they there than the sisters pushed him into the water. As they watched their brother call for help, Arianna almost threw him a stick but Lady was quick to stop her. After a minute or so of struggling the greedy Keith was gone and the sisters would now live happily and fairly.

Second ending

A story of three cats Arianna, Keith and Lady, triplets born to their mother Aqua. Two girls and a boy, as it is expected for a mother to be closer to her son. Aqua took a liking to Keith and soon he was her favorite. Lady and Arianna were often tossed to the curb when they crawled under her for some milk and as for Keith he was allowed anywhere and everywhere. As they grew up it became worse as he had private lessons for fishing tricks and catching mice. Arianna and Lady had to learn on their own from stray cats at the river. From all the pampering Keith added quite some weight and his ego was as big as his belly. He had discovered he was the apple of his mother’s eye and oh didn’t he take advantage of that. He ate from anyone’s plate and displaced his sisters on their beds ever so often. Soon he was calling all the shots and the sisters decided they had had enough. They burnt the midnight oil hatching the perfect plan to get rid of their greedy bossy brother. In the morning, they convinced Keith to go to the river with them for some fish, he had refused but they had insisted that they needed his amazing skills to catch them some good fish. He proudly led the way boasting of his abilities and good looks. The sisters rolled their eyes behind him but agreed with his every word. When they got to the river, they insisted on going to the deepest part as it had the most fish. Keith blindly agreed and no sooner were they there than the sisters pushed him into the water. As they watched their brother call for help, Arianna and Lady were struck with sadness and love for their brother. Arianna tried to throw him a stick to hold on to but he was too far. Lady jumped into the water and swam as fast as she could toward her brother. She was able to get to him but he was very heavy and the current was slightly strong. Arianna got into the water too and together they brought Keith to the riverbed. He coughed out some water and was ok after a while. He did not need to ask why they had attempted to kill him, he knew he had been a jerk and he apologized for it. With the forgiveness of his sisters and a near death experience, Keith changed for the better and life was easier for everyone.