please see all attachments. I have attached my week one assignment with the instructors feedback. Please make proper corections to the thesis statement and provide proper acedimic resources as stated

Margaret,

While you have chosen a prompt, make sure you follow directions carefully. In this case you needed to include the number of your prompt and the first sentence.

Make sure you use specific details when you discuss what interests you about your chosen prompt and the text you have chosen.

Your thesis is not completely clear yet. Please remember this should tell the reader your prompt, your chosen reading and the main points you will address in your essay.

As you progress with your essay, you will need to develop stronger key ideas to support your thesis. Remember, these should not be plot points. These need to be your own observations based on your chosen prompt and point that will support the prompt and your thesis.

You have asked a specific question regarding your project. Please see individual assignment responses for my answer!

Good work with grammar. The majority of your journal is well written. Verb tenses, sentence variation, comma usage and word choices are relatively few of errors.