Post two specific questions that your classmates can focus on when providing feedback on your essay. Attach your rough draft of Essay 3 to the post. You can find the Essay 3 Guidelines in the Assignme

Revision Worksheet: Essays 3 & 4

  • What did you do in your revision that made your thesis stronger?



  • Did you use additional examples to develop your points in the body of the essay? List them.




  • List at two additional specific points made in the peer review. What did you do to address those issues in your revision?



  • What specifically did you say in each of the responses you made to others to help them revise their work?

First Response:


Second Response: