· Character: Does Troy Maxson deserve the bad things that happen to him? Does he bring on those negative consequences through his own actions, or is he a sympathetic victim of external forces? [It’
ENG 112 Essay #2 Write an analytical essay of at least 750 words in response to one of the following prompts.Theme: If tragedy is meant to be morally instructive, as the ancient Greeks believed, what is the message the audience is supposed to take away from Fences? Why is this tale told, and why is it told the way it is? Be sure to demonstrate how Wilson uses specific literary techniques to convey this theme to the reader. Incorporate support from at least one weighty and credible academic secondary source to back up your argument.
Character: Does Troy Maxson deserve the bad things that happen to him? Does he bring on those negative consequences through his own actions, or is he a sympathetic victim of external forces? [It’s perfectly acceptable to argue something in between these extreme positions, but your overall argument should put forth a firm claim about how Wilson wants readers to view Troy.] Be sure to provide detailed textual support for your argument. Incorporate support from at least one weighty and credible academic secondary source to back up your argument.
Your purpose is to present an analytical argument about the selected topic that provides supporting textual evidence from both a primary and secondary text, and your audience is the academic community. Because academic writing should be as objective and impersonal as possible, avoid personal statements (“I,” “me,” “my,” etc.) and uses of the second person (“you”).
FormatThe final essay must be at least 750 words in length (not counting headers, Works Cited pages, etc.) and must be submitted electronically (on the course website) as a Microsoft Word document. All essays must follow the conventions of formal academic writing: double spacing, a standard font, 12 pt font size, and standard margins. Students must include the following information in the upper left-hand corner of the first page: Name, Date, Course Number and Section, and Assignment Number. For example:
John Smith
February 15, 2019
ENG112-789
Essay #2
Document all source material according to MLA guidelines, providing both in-text citations and a Works Cited page. NOTE: Proper documentation is one of the main skills that will be evaluated in this essay.
Schedule
See the course calendar for specific due dates for the following steps:
Peer review: Submit a complete draft of the essay by the date specified in the course. When drafts are submitted, follow the course instructions for peer review, in which students will read each other’s drafts and make helpful suggestions for revision. Your performance in peer review is evaluated and is part of your participation grade.
Final submission: Submit your final essay in the appropriate place on the due date. Any papers received after midnight on that day will be penalized for lateness. Essays are docked seven points for each day they are late, and essays more than a week late will not be accepted.
Assessment
The essay is worth 100 points and will be graded according to the attached rubric.
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An A paper | A B paper | A C paper | A D paper | An F paper | ||
Content | ||||||
assignment requirements | fulfills the requirements laid out in the prompt (topic, length, format, etc.) | does not fulfill the requirements laid out in the prompt (topic, length, format, etc.) | ||||
thesis statement | puts forth a clear thesis statement that is specific, manageable, and arguable | puts forth a mostly clear thesis statement that is specific, manageable, and arguable | puts forth a fairly clear thesis statement that has some problems with being specific, manageable, and arguable | puts forth a thesis statement that is not clear and/or is not specific manageable, and arguable | fails to put forth an identifiable thesis statement | |
argument | lays out a logical argument that thoroughly develops the thesis statement | lays out a logical argument that adequately develops the thesis statement | lays out an argument with some issues with logical development of the thesis statement | lays out an argument that barely develops the thesis statement | fails to lay out an argument that develops the thesis statement | |
support | backs up all claims with sufficient and appropriate evidence from the primary source and at least one weighty and credible academic secondary source | backs up most claims with sufficient and appropriate evidence from the primary source and at least one weighty and credible academic secondary source | backs up some claims with sufficient and appropriate evidence from the primary source, but there are issues with the use of the secondary source | backs up only a few claims with sufficient and appropriate evidence, and does not use a weighty and credible secondary source | fails to back up claims with sufficient and appropriate evidence from the primary source and at least one weighty and credible secondary source | |
audience | shows a strong sense of the expectations and standards of the audience | shows a solid sense of the expectations and standards of the audience | shows an adequate sense of the expectations and standards of the audience | shows a faulty sense of the expectations and standards of the audience | fails to show any sense of the expectations and standards of the audience | |
Organization | ||||||
structure | is logically structured, with supporting points tied to the main idea clearly | is logically structured, with supporting points tied to the main idea mostly clearly | is logically structured, with supporting points tied to the main idea fairly clearly | has significant issues with logical structure | fails to convey a sense of logical structure | |
unity | strongly displays unity by maintaining focus on a single argument | solidly displays unity by maintaining focus on a single argument | displays unity by maintaining focus on a single idea or argument | has significant issues with maintaining focus on a single idea or argument | fails to maintain focus on a single argument | |
coherence | provides a strong sense of logical flow, using transitions to connect ideas | provides a solid sense of logical flow, using transitions to connect ideas | provides an adequate sense of logical flow, using transitions to connect most ideas | provides an often unclear sense of logical flow | fails to provide a sense of logical connection from idea to idea | |
introduction | presents a very clear introduction that strongly engages the reader and offers a blueprint | presents a clear introduction that solidly engages the reader and offers a blueprint | presents a clear introduction that adequately engages the reader and offers a blueprint | presents a somewhat unclear introduction that hardly engages the reader and does not offer a blueprint | presents an unclear introduction that fails to engage the reader or offer a blueprint | |
conclusion | presents a conclusion that indicates what has been gained and provides a strong sense of closure | presents a conclusion that neatly ties up the argument and provides a solid sense of closure | presents a conclusion that recaps the argument and provides an adequate sense of closure | presents a conclusion that provides a minimal sense of closure | fails to present a clear conclusion | |
Style/Expression | ||||||
tone | always uses a tone and diction level appropriate for academic writing | usually uses a tone and diction level appropriate for academic writing | adequately uses a tone and diction level appropriate for academic writing | often does not use a tone and diction level appropriate for academic writing | fails to use a tone and diction level appropriate for academic writing | |
clarity | expresses ideas extremely clearly and concisely | expresses ideas mostly clearly and concisely | expresses ideas fairly clearly and concisely | displays a lack of clarity and conciseness that hurts the argument | fails to convey ideas effectively | |
variety | varies sentence structure very effectively, helping readers move through the argument smoothly | varies sentence structure solidly, avoiding repetition and choppiness | varies sentence structure adequately, mostly avoiding repetition and choppiness | uses repetitive sentence structure that hurts the flow of the argument somewhat | fails to vary sentence structure, significantly interfering with the flow of the argument | |
Grammar/Mechanics | ||||||
spelling | contains no errors in terms of spelling, capitalization, italics, etc. | contains an error that does not interfere with the presentation of ideas | contains a few errors that hardly interfere with the presentation of ideas | contains several errors that somewhat interfere with the presentation of ideas | contains frequent errors that significantly interfere with the presentation of ideas | |
punctuation | contains minimal punctuation errors | contains punctuation errors that do not interfere with the presentation of ideas | contains punctuation errors that hardly interfere with the presentation of ideas | contains punctuation errors that somewhat interfere with the presentation of ideas | contains punctuation errors that significantly interfere with the presentation of ideas | |
sentence construction | contains no fragments, fused sentences, or comma splices | contains a sentence error that does not interfere with the presentation of ideas | contains sentence errors that hardly interfere with the presentation of ideas | contains several sentence errors that somewhat interfere with the presentation of ideas | contains sentence errors that significantly interfere with the presentation of ideas | |
tense | contains no errors in terms of verb tense | contains a verb tense error that does not interfere with the presentation of ideas | contains verb tense errors that hardly interfere with the presentation of ideas | contains several verb tense errors that somewhat interfere with the presentation of ideas | contains verb tense errors that significantly interfere with the presentation of ideas | |
agreement | contains no agreement or parallelism errors | contains an agreement or parallelism error that does not interfere with the presentation of ideas | contains agreement and parallelism errors that hardly interfere with the presentation of ideas | contains several agreement or parallelism errors that somewhat interfere with the presentation of ideas | contains agreement or parallelism errors that significantly interfere with the presentation of ideas | |
quotation | presents and incorporates all source material properly and smoothly | displays a minor issue with the presentation and incorporation of source material | displays a few minor issues with the presentation and incorporation of source material | displays several issues with the presentation and incorporation of source material | entirely fails to present and incorporate source material properly | |
documentation | follows MLA documentation guidelines perfectly | displays a minor issue with MLA documentation | displays a few minor issues with MLA documentation | displays several issues with MLA documentation | entirely fails to follow MLA documentation guidelines |
Draftwork/Review: