Here is a paper that I need a fnal draft for. I have included the Rough Draft and the feedback instructions form the professor. I ahve also attached the APA template to be used as well as the literatu

Here is some feedback from instructor to consider when you revise this.

1. Very strong first paragraph, but add a thesis to the very end that makes it clear the essay will analyze the use of logic and emotion (see part 3, step 2) in the instructions.

2. Paragraphs 3 and 4 should be a specific analysis of the use of logos (logic) and pathos (emotion) in the article by Goodman. What does she do to make emotional appeals to the reader. How does she use logic to advance her argument/position? Develop these two paragraphs more specifically as an analysis of these two persuasive techniques.

3. Edit for minor errors and/or awkward writing.

4. Consider adding a quote, surprising fact/stat or one of specific piece of info to the conclusion in order to make one last impression on the reader.

5. Use some direct quotes in the body of this essay (from the article by Goodman) to support your analysis with concrete examples from the text.