Revise the essay according to the suggestion

Evaluation

Rubric

Earned

Possible

• Unclear statement of SS

• Did not reference causal diagram

• Did not reference 3 legs of TQM

• Did not assess layers of firm

• Made recommendations but did not relate back to TQM

5/60

Clear statement of stakeholder satisfaction with a clear link of why that level of satisfaction is obtained by the company’s ability to exercise the causal diagram including the 3 legs of TQM and quality of management/leadership, assessment, design, conformance, and control in the three layers of the firm. Then how they should improve or what they should keep doing to remain successful if already successful 60%

• No mention of CD

0/10

Link is established between case and causal diagram 10%

• Lacked clarity of results and relation of your ideas to TQM

5/10

Support of your statements, why your ideas will work and the firm level financial results of implementing your ideas 20%

• Hard to follow, spelling and grammar errors through out

5/10

Flow, readability, grammar 10%

T: 15/100