After your partner has revised your work, reflect on the revision you received.  This is not a response written to the person who revised your work. It’s a reflection on the revision itself. In you

“Life as a teen”

Every chance I get,

I use it to look at the trends,

I do not pay attention to issues that are political,

Neither do I associate myself with issues that are economical,

Rather I tend to take a liking in everything that I can impact a difference on,

As a teen,

My brain is considered poor.

They make people suffer and call it a victorious win,

Nevertheless, who am I to stand in between?

I post about ridiculous things happening in the society,

And people call it crap,

Whereas a singer sings, the ABCs and they call it rap,

They say I lack solid grounds to blame the government,

While they continue feasting like hounds in their big tents,

Communities are in lack while leaders grab and tuck,

Politics is no longer about the livelihood of citizens,

Politicians have turned into farmers changing us into herded hens,

Snakes have left the forest and managed to book mansions?

Misguided, we selected hyenas to guard goats,

Now they are feasting on our throats,

The elected have selected themselves, earthly gods,

Making electors their servants in their own compounds,

News have turned into horror stories,

Filled with woes and cries,

However, no one heeds to such calls,

Even though all that happens is seen and heard,

The awakening is feared, and all planned actions have been cleared.

I do not believe in the Messiah,

I do not believe in running away to another land,

I might be young but am not giving up my land,

Where are the so-called heroes?

Why do we suffer from issues that had been foretold?

What happened to their remedies of gold?

Who will stand out and be bold,

Who will save us from our very own hold?

Where do we run to, to restore the old?