Revision for MFS ThesisEyewitness Testimony: How Accurate is it?Just a few small revisions that were suggested by my Instructor before final review.Attached is my thesis and the feedback from my instr

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  1. You indicated a goal as:

In addition, "the study will make a solid attempt to bring all the data in a coherent manner in order to achieve the objectives of the study".


  1. I don’t see that accomplished in Chapter IV: Results.  You should have a table for your results, for each research hypothesis.  


  1. Also, not clear from Chapter III: Methodology how your decision will be made to accept or reject each hypothesis.