Please check the requirements of the project in the attached PDF document. Then Check the project work DONE by ME attached in WORD file. There are references and inline citations u need to fix some of
Career Research Report Feedback
Avoid “you”:
Don’t: First, you have to take the GRE and get a score of….
Do: UCSF requires a minimum GRE score of X, according to their website.
Style = straightforward, not conversational:
Don’t: Well, the best school for a degree in ….
Do: According to Newsweek magazine’s ranking of colleges on its website, the best school for a degree in X is the UCSD.
Remain impartial:
Don’t: Since I like to surf and also be immersed in a nerdy environment, working at Qualcomm would be really great!
Do: Qualcomm is located in San Diego. According to the website Glassdoor, most employees are computer savvy and much of the socializing amongst employees involves “geeky activities.”
Complete attribution: not only the title and not only author, but also where the article or info appeared—on a website? In a paper? In a book?
Don’t: According to John Smith, the average salary for …..
Do: In the article, “Payscale for PTs,” on the website PT Journal, physical therapist John Smith lists the average salary for….
Do: Use outside sources as well as company’s own website:
Press releases, news articles, etc.
Searches for the works of or news about specific key individuals relevant to your particular skills, interests and goals.
Do not cut & paste material from websites; do compose your own summary of key information & integrate quotes and paraphrases into your writing.
Do: Use correct punctuation/italics for titles
The New York Times (newspaper & magazine titles)
Glassdoor (website titles)
Outliers (book titles)
“How to Get a Job” (article titles)
“Average Salary for Graduates” (subheading or section titles)
