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Rubric

Overall Score (out of 5)

Description

Criteria

5

The "5" essay demonstrates superior writing ability although occasional faults may be present.

  • Has a clear thesis which addresses the topic and responds effectively to all aspects of the task;

  • Is logically organized and divided into well-structured paragraphs;

  • Is fully developed with specific details, examples and arguments that cogently support the author’s thesis;

  • Has an effective, fluent style marked by sentence variety and a clear command of language;

  • Is largely free of errors in grammar, punctuation and mechanics.

4

The “4” essay demonstrates strong writing ability.

  • Responds to all or most aspects of the topic with a clear thesis (implied or explicit);

  • Is organized clearly;

  • Is developed with details, evidence, examples and arguments that are relevant to the thesis;

  • Has a readable style with effective word choice and some sentence variety;

  • Is generally free of errors in grammar, punctuation and mechanics.

3

The “3” essay demonstrates adequate writing ability.

  • Provides a thesis that responds to all or most of the topic at least implicitly;

  • Is organized in a sequential (if not always logical) manner that is consistent with paragraph conventions;

  • Offers some supporting evidence/reasons and attempts to elaborate with some details;

  • Is written in correct sentences, and word choices are correct, although possibly vague and/or repetitious at times;

  • Demonstrates basic control of grammar, punctuation and mechanics so that sentence level errors, if present, do not confuse the reader.

2

The “2” essay demonstrates marginal writing ability with one or more weaknesses.

  • Provides a weak or unclear thesis and/or an inadequate response to the topic;

  • Uses an improper or confused organizational structure;

  • Provides general, superficial, sparse or irrelevant supporting evidence/reasons;

  • Contains confusing sentence structure and vague or imprecise word choice;

  • Demonstrates limited control of grammar, punctuation and mechanics through distracting or confusing errors.

1

The “1” essay demonstrates weak writing ability with more than one serious weakness.

  • Responds with a weak or no thesis, or the writer appears to misunderstand the topic;

  • Provides very little organizational structure;

  • Offers little or no supporting evidence or only evidence that is irrelevant to the topic;

  • Is difficult to read or understand due to problems in sentence structure and word choice;

  • Contains numerous errors in grammar, punctuation or mechanics that interfere with meaning and suggests a lack of control of written English conventions.

0

The “0” essay demonstrates very weak writing ability with severe weaknesses.

  • Demonstrates little or no understanding of the topic;

  • Has no discernible organization and appears random in thought;

  • Includes no evidence or reasons and may only repeat the central idea;

  • Demonstrates an inability to form sentences or choose correct vocabulary;

  • Contains numerous errors in grammar, punctuation or mechanics that suggests a lack of familiarity with written English conventions.