Essay #1 Editing

Food C ult u re s E ssa y # 1.d ocx by A hm ed S hake el S ubm is sio n d ate :

15-N ov-2 020 0 8:5 3P M ( U TC -0 500) S ubm is sio n ID :

1447082159 F ile n am e:

Food_C ult u re s_ E ssa y_ 231.d ocx (2 2.8 3K ) W ord c o unt:

939 C hara cte r c o unt:

4772 1 0 % SIM IL A R IT Y IN DEX 0 % IN TE R NET S O URCES 0 % PU BLIC ATIO NS 10 % STU DEN T P APER S 1 8 % 2 1 % 3 1 % Exclu de q uote s On Exclu de b ib lio gra phy On Exclu de m atc h es Off Food C ult u re s E ssa y # 1.d ocx ORIG IN ALIT Y R EPO RT PR IM AR Y S O URCES Subm it te d to S ie rra C olle ge Stu dent P aper Subm it te d to F ulle rto n C olle ge Stu dent P aper Subm it te d to V ir g in ia C om munit y C olle ge Syste m Stu dent P aper Food C ult u re s E ssa y # 1.d ocx PAG E 1 Mis sin g " ," Revie w th e r u le s fo r u sin g p unctu atio n m ark s.

PAG E 2 Mis sin g " ," Revie w th e r u le s fo r u sin g p unctu atio n m ark s.

P/V You h ave u se d th e p assiv e v o ic e in th is s e nte nce . Y ou m ay w ant to r e vis e it u sin g th e a ctiv e v o ic e .

Artic le E rro r You m ay n eed to r e m ove th is a rtic le .

P/V You h ave u se d th e p assiv e v o ic e in th is s e nte nce . Y ou m ay w ant to r e vis e it u sin g th e a ctiv e v o ic e .

Artic le E rro r You m ay n eed to r e m ove th is a rtic le .

Mis sin g " ," Revie w th e r u le s fo r u sin g p unctu atio n m ark s.

Sp.

This w ord is m is sp elle d. U se a d ic tio nary o r s p ellc h ecke r w hen y o u p ro ofr e ad y o ur w ork .

Sp.

This w ord is m is sp elle d. U se a d ic tio nary o r s p ellc h ecke r w hen y o u p ro ofr e ad y o ur w ork .

Sp.

This w ord is m is sp elle d. U se a d ic tio nary o r s p ellc h ecke r w hen y o u p ro ofr e ad y o ur w ork .

PAG E 3 Artic le E rro r You m ay n eed to r e m ove th is a rtic le .

Pre p .

You m ay b e u sin g th e w ro ng p re posit io n.

Artic le E rro r You m ay n eed to r e m ove th is a rtic le .

Mis sin g " ," Revie w th e r u le s fo r u sin g p unctu atio n m ark s.

Pro ofr e ad This p art o f th e s e nte nce c o nta in s a n e rro r o r m is sp ellin g th at m ake s y o ur m eanin g uncle ar. Artic le E rro r You m ay n eed to u se a n a rtic le b efo re th is w ord .

Mis sin g " ," Revie w th e r u le s fo r u sin g p unctu atio n m ark s.

PAG E 4