revise and rewrite

Rewrite the “How to Write Clear, Complete, and Professional Emails” paper with these instructions

  • Work on developing your suggestions so your audience understands how to apply them and why they are important. Also, ensure the suggestions you choose adequately address the specific issues the help desk is having with email communication.

  • What are the specific issues causing incomplete and unclear emails? Work on completeness and accuracy: The purpose is to offer three suggestions of your own for improving emails and then ask them to contribute suggestions for the Handbook. Develop your suggestions and show how they will address the specific issues with emails that the Help Desk is experiencing.

  • Use Standard Style for Printed Documents and correct memo format

  • Incorporate informative, parallel headings that "tell the story" of what follows in the text

  • Incorporate one concrete image as a way of motivating your readers to adopt your suggestions

  • Motivate a specific action in the closing, with a clear path for compliance.

  • Address any problems with Red or Orange Level Strategies

  • Correct any problems with overall professionalism, including grammatical, mechanical, stylistic, or clarity errors.