Hi, I have particular situation because a tutor did not finish his work. Basically I have a paper due and he did start but did not finish it. I would like to know if someone could finish it or if the
PEER EDIT: EXPECTATIONS
The expectations section of the paper is a concluding section of the paper that comments on the previous sections. It has two parts—the Conclusions and the Recommendations.
CONCLUSIONS
The Conclusions section has two paragraphs. The first paragraph summarizes the highlights of the Review of Literature. It is one paragraph long.
Does the conclusion section provide a brief summary of the review of literature?
Paragraph includes first person; maybe consider rewording. Doesn’t seem to be a summary of the Review of Literature and doesn’t draw solid conclusions from the research in the Review either. I would look at the example on Campus Web to get an idea of what the section is supposed to look like.
Need more clear sentences that tie back to Review of Literature, so I understand what your paper was talking about. Specifically, your first 2 sentences confused me a lot; they’re repetitions of themselves and seem to be more filler than anything.
The second paragraph discusses the expected results of the survey outlined in the Research Design Report. Do not make up numbers or stats. Just speculate about what you would expect the results to be like. (Before you fill out this sheet, peer edit the Research Design Report first.)
Does the second paragraph provide reasonable expectations of the research design? Explain.
Paragraph includes first person; maybe consider rewording. Reasonable to believe in expectations of the research design. However, the method of getting there is a bit confusing; stated at the end that most questions asked would be in a yes or no format to create tables with data, however, questions seem to be more open-ended than definitive. Is this a misinterpretation of your survey, or do you have more specific questions in mind?
Other than that, your survey looks solid!
RECOMMENDATIONS
The recommendations section of the paper offers insight into how to address the problem or opportunity described in the research statement. A recommendation is a suggested action. Recommendations should be written in command form (e.g., All computer users should use virus protection software to protect their data.)
The recommendation should then be explained in a paragraph. The paper should have at least two but not more than five recommendations.
Does the paper have at least two recommendations?
No recommendations, need at least 2. I would look at the sample paper on Campus Web to see what these look like if you need help.
Are the recommendations in command form?
N/A
Do you think the recommendations are clearly explained?
N/A
Do you think they would help with the problem?
N/A
