Analysis of a poem

P O L: A naly sis o f P oem D ulc e e t D eco ru m E st L aunch A udio in a N ew W in dow B Y W IL F R ED O W EN B ent d ouble , lik e o ld b eggars u nder s a cks, K nock-k n eed, c o ughin g lik e h ags, w e c u rs e d th ro ugh s lu dge, T ill o n th e h auntin g fla re s w e tu rn ed o ur b acks, A nd to w ard s o ur d is ta nt r e st b egan to tr u dge. M en m arc h ed a sle ep. M any h ad lo st th eir b oots , B ut lim ped o n, b lo od-s h od. A ll w ent la m e; a ll b lin d; D ru nk w it h fa tig ue; d eaf e ve n to th e h oots O f g as-s h ells d ro ppin g s o ftly b ehin d. G as! G AS! Q uic k, b oys!— An e csta sy o f fu m blin g F it tin g th e c lu m sy h elm ets ju st in tim e, B ut s o m eone s till w as y e llin g o ut a nd s tu m blin g A nd flo und’r in g lik e a m an in fir e o r lim e.— D im th ro ugh th e m is ty p anes a nd th ic k g re en lig ht, A s u nder a g re en s e a, I s a w h im d ro w nin g . I n a ll m y d re am s b efo re m y h elp le ss s ig h t, H e p lu nges a t m e, g utte rin g, c h okin g, d ro w nin g. I f in s o m e s m oth erin g d re am s, y o u to o c o uld p ace B ehin d th e w agon th at w e flu ng h im in , A nd w atc h th e w hit e e ye s w rit h in g in h is fa ce , H is h angin g fa ce , lik e a d evil’s s ic k o f s in ; I f y o u c o uld h ear, a t e ve ry jo lt , th e b lo od C om e g arg lin g fr o m th e fr o th -c o rru pte d lu ngs, O bsce ne a s c a nce r, b it te r a s th e c u d O f v ile , in cu ra ble s o re s o n in noce nt to ngu es,— M y fr ie nd, y o u w ould n ot te ll w it h s u ch h ig h z e st T o c h ild re n a rd ent fo r s o m e d esp era te g lo ry , T he o ld L ie : D ulc e e t d eco ru m e st P ro p atr ia m ori. N ote s: L atin p hra se is fr o m th e R om an p oet H ora ce : “ It is s w ee t a nd fit tin g to d ie fo r o ne’s c o untr y .” D ir e ctio ns: W hen y o u a re a ske d to p ro vid e th e c h u nks o f y o u r p oem , m ake s u re y o u p ro vid e a ll o f th em . F or th e p urp ose o f th is a ctiv it y , d o n ot u se m ore th an fo ur lin es fo r a c h u nk. 1 . P oetr y E xp lo ra tio n: S yn ta x ( 5 ) D ir e ctio ns: T a ke th e p oem y o u a re m em oriz in g fo r P O L a nd d iv id e it b y c h u nks u sin g s yn ta x. T yp e / c o py e ach c h unk o n a lin e. P ay p a rtic u la r a tte ntio n to w here p unctu atio n is , s o a s to p ause a ppro pria te ly . R e-w rit e y o ur p oem b ase d o n th ose c h u nks/p ause s. 2 . P oetr y E xp lo ra tio n: Im ag ery ( 5 ) D ir e ctio ns: Id entif y e ve ry im age in y o ur p oem . W rit e th e p hra se in th e a ppro pria te c a te gory . V is u al A udit o ry G usta to ry T a ctile O lf a cto ry ● P oetr y E xp lo ra tio n: T it le ( 5 ) ● F or # 1 in dic a te th e p re dic tio n y o u m ade w it h th e tit le . If y o u r p oem is a s o n net w hic h u se s th e fir s t lin e a s th e lit tle , w ork w it h th e fir s t lin e. ● F or # 2, in dic a te w hat th e p oem a ctu ally e nded u p b ein g a bout. ● F or # 3, e xp la in w hy th e tit le is a ppro pria te fo r th e p oem . 1 . 2 . 3 . ● P oetr y E xp lo ra tio n: S peaker/S it u atio n ( 5 ) ● E xp la in in a s e nte nce w ho th e s p eake r o f th e p oem is . ● N ext, p ull s o m e lin e/p hra se /id ea fr o m th e p oem th at s u p ports y o u r a sse rtio n o f w ho th e s p eake r is . ● F in ally , in o ne s e nte nce , e xp la in th e s it u a tio n th at r e quir e s th e w rit in g o f th is p oem . W hat h as th e s p eake r e xp erie nce d to m ake h im /h er/it w rit e th is p oem ? S peake r: H ow I k n ow : S it u atio n: 4 . P oetr y E xp lo ra tio n: D en ota tio n ( 5 ) D ir e ctio ns: D efin e a ll th e w ord s y o u d o n ot k n o w in y o u r p oem . D o N O T u se th e r o ot o f a w ord t o d efin e it s e lf . U se th e d efin it io n th at is a ppro pria te fo r th e p oem . If y o u k n o w th e d efin it io n o f e ve ry s in gle w ord , th en c h oose 4 w ord s th at a re th e m ost c h a lle ngin g v o ca b ula ry a nd p ro vid e t h at d efin it io n. IN CLU DE a ny w ord y o u d o n ot k n o w h ow to s a y. W ord D efin it io n 5 . P oetr y E xp lo ra tio n: C onnota tio n- A ll t h e t h oughts , f e elin gs, w ord s, c u lt u ra l a sso cia tio ns, e xte n ded d efin it io n o f a w ord . ( 1 0) D ir e ctio ns: C opy/p aste y o ur P O L p oem d iv id ed b y c h u nks o n th e le ft s id e. In th e m id dle c o lu m n, i d entif y th e M OST im porta nt w ord in th e c h u nk a nd ty p e th at w ord . T o d ete rm in e th e m ost i m porta nt w ord , a sk y o urs e lf w hic h w ord m ake s a d if f e re nce to th e m ea nin g o r m ore o f a n i m pact o n m eanin g. O nce y o u h ave id entif ie d th e m ost im pa ctfu l w ord in th e c h u nk, s p end tim e w rit in g a ll o f th e c o nnota tio ns y o u h ave w it h th e w ord . E ve n tu ally , y o u w ill b egin to n otic e a p atte rn o f th e s a m e ty p e o f c o nnota tio ns e m erg in g fr o m th e p oem . N ote - w hen w ork in g w it h t h is s te p fo r c la ss, w ork to id entif y a m in im um o f 1 0 t o ta l w ord s in y o ur p oem . If y o u h ave f e w er th an 1 0 c h unks, y o u m ay h ave to c h o ose m ore th an o ne im po rta nt w ord fo r c o nnota tio n. If y o u h ave m ore th an 1 0 c h unks, m ake s u re y o u w ork w it h e ach c h u nk. C hunk W ord Y our E xte nded D efin it io n 1 . 2 . 3 . 4 . 5 . 6 . 7 . 8 . 9 . 1 0. 1 1 . 1 2. 1 3. 1 4. 1 5. 7 . P oetr y E xp lo ra tio n: S um mary /P ara p hra se ( 5 ) D ir e ctio ns: Y ou s h ould a lr e ady h ave y o ur p oem fo r P O L d iv id ed b y s yn ta ctic a l u nit s /c h unks. In t h e ta ble b elo w , c o py y o ur p oem o ne c h unk a t a tim e o n th e le ft- h and c o lu m n. O n th e r ig ht- h and c o lu m n, s u m mariz e o r p ara phra se w hat is h appenin g fo r th at c h u nk o r w hat th e m eanin g is o f t h at c h unk. Y our P oem C hunk b y C hunk Y our S um mary o r P ara phra se o f th e C hu nk 8 . P oetr y E xp lo ra tio n : F ig u ra tiv e L an gu age ( 5 ) D ir e ctio ns: I d en tif y A LL o f t h e f ig ura tiv e l a n guag e/m eta p hor u m bre lla u se d i n y our p oem . Y ou m ay r e fe r t o t h e M eta p hors a n d M ean in g h an dout f o r y our l is t o f f ig ura tiv e l a n guag e. ● O n t h e l e ft h an d c o lu m n i n se rt e v ery s in gle c h unk o f y our p oem . ● I n t h e n ex t c o lu m n w rite N /A i f t h ere i s n ot a n y f ig ura tiv e l a n guag e. I f t h ere i s f ig ura tiv e l a n guag e, i d en tif y t h e t y pe. ● I n t h e n ex t c o lu m n w rite a s e n te n ce s a y in g w hat i s b ein g c o m pare d t o w hat. ● I n t h e f in al c o lu m n, w rite a s e n te n ce e x pla in in g t h e s ig nif ic an ce o f t h e c o m paris o n. E xpla in w hat m ore y ou u nders ta n d w ith t h e c o m paris o n. P O EM C H UNK M ETA PH OR U M BRELLA W HAT I S B EIN G C O M PA RED T O W HAT S IG NIF IC A NCE O F C O M PA RIS O N P O L: T o ne A naly sis o f P oem ( 5 ) D ir e ctio ns: U se th e p ro vid ed to ne lis ts in th e P oetr y s e ctio n o f C la ssro om to d ete rm in e th e to n e t h at is a ppro pria te fo r e ach s yn ta ctic u nit /c h u nk. H ig hlig ht w here y o u s e e th e m ajo r s h if t in th e p oem . R em em ber th at a s h if t in to ne c a n b e c o m ple m en ta ry o r c o n tr a stin g. Y ou m ust c h oose a s p ecif ic to ne w ord . Y ou m ay n ot c h oose a g enera l c a te gory . S yn ta ctic U nit / C hunk fr o m P oem T he to ne y o u w ill u se in d eliv e ry o f c h unk