There are 3 files attached one of them need to be revised and the other two are instructions. Please ask if you have any question. Word count: I have about 1500 but I need it to be expanded 2250 words

Please read this carefully:

Comments that was given on the paper that needed to be revision.

There are the comments that was given. (where ever you see red this are the comments in order)

1. By this point, we are wondering who your central character/protagonist is.

2. Be sure to frame this as a story. Use their first names-- unless you have a particular reason for "Mr."?

3. How might you tell this "in scene"?

4. This repeats the previous paragraph.

5. Annotations/citations?

I recommend identifying a main character, and telling their story "in scene" (moment to moment), rather than in summary/informative format.

 (write it as a story rather than an informative summary-- and be sure to meet the minimum 2250 word count. Also, don't forget to include an Annotated Works Cited page and in-text citations or footnotes