I need assistance with a revision of an outline and bibliography for an English research paper

[Example of an Outline for the Research Paper]

Student’s Last Name ii

[Note: Words in blue or in brackets will not actually appear in your final outline. Outline pages are numbered with small roman numerals.]

Title of Your Paper

[Write a tentative title for your paper]

[Preliminary] Thesis: [Write your preliminary thesis sentence here.]

1. Introduction: [Write a brief introduction (no more than 150 words) for this outline.]

1. First supporting point. [Write your first supporting point here.]

1. 1. First example, part of explanation, detail, etc.

1. 1. 1. Add more subheadings if necessary.

1. 1. 1. 1. Add more subheadings if necessary.

1. 1. 1. 1. Add more subheadings if necessary.

1. 1. 1. Add more subheadings if necessary.

1. 1. Second example, part of explanation, detail, etc.

1. 1. Third example, part of explanation, detail, etc.

1. Second supporting point. [Write your second supporting point here.]

1. 1. First example, part of explanation, detail, etc.

1. 1. Second example, part of explanation, detail, etc.

1. Third supporting point. [Write your third supporting point here.]

1. 1. Continue the same format as above

1. 1. Continue the same format as above

1. Conclusion: [Write a brief conclusion (no more than 150 words) for this preliminary outline.]