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Application for policy officer with the NSW office of emergency management

International program

My name is Gorgees Zia, and I will be finishing soon my undergraduate Bachelor of Security Studies degree at Macquarie University Sydney Australia.

About my studies in the degree of Security Studies I have completed a numerous subject at the university, such as Security in an age Risk, Law human rights and global governance, principles of management, national security, intelligence and counterintelligence, immigration, politics and policies, policing and crime, intelligence policy, cyber security in practice, cybercrime, ethical practice in security studies (PACE) and many more. All these subjects have provided me knowledge and understanding the issues the world and Australia is facing from the past to present, and how we can overcome those obstacles in the emergency management. Furthermore, Security studies have gave me a lot of insights in social sciences, humanities and arts in a significant way, such as the importance of culture, terrorism, intelligence, emergences, poverty, health, energy, and war. My view towards those concepts have developed and which allows me to find the most effect and best solutions for those challenges.

Throughout my journey at Macquarie university, I have been an intern to work at Macquarie Bank in Sydney Australia. I was interning for risk management group in Central Compliance training team.

My focus was to work with the team to ensure regulatory training requirements are met. One of the interesting projects that I worked on, at the beginning of my internship, it was the summary of the outside business activities policy and gifts and entertainment policy. My main work was to summaries these two policies in Excel form and also on the word document, also to create a new policy about how we can improve those policies in a better way for employees such as what is acceptable and non-acceptable gifts and entertainment outside business.

The second project that I also liked the final presentation with other compliance interns, which it was about the interfering the royal commission into banks. In the presentation I delivered the purpose of the commission and why the royal commission was investigating into banks and other financial services, because there was a huge misconduct in those companies. Throughout my research, I have developed an understating of the challenges in investigating and finding policies. Also, I have improved my team skills and how to build relationship with the team in workplace, as well as my biggest challenge was to prove my worth and expanding my research in the very short period, which I learned all the necessary skills to deliver work that is of the highest quality.

My studies and my volunteering work at Leap Up Program at Macquarie University. The program which helps refugees high school students from different backgrounds, to provide them what does it look like as a university student and also to prepare them for college life. My journey through this program which lasted about 2 months, I have gained different experiences such as accepting and understanding different cultural views, how to communicate with people from diverse backgrounds, how to find the best solutions within the team to help people in disadvantage areas or places. And most importantly, how to think critically to create aspirations and possibilities for those people who needs assistant in education environment.

My university studies from, presenting, reading, writing and researching have enabled me to improve my learning skills for the future. My current studies in PACE, Ethical Practice in Security studies have demonstrated me the importance of the teamwork, how to collaborate with each other as well as communication with the department of defence force. Time management is one of the skills that I used to finish my presentation and other task on time, especially with the team, which makes it harder, and we all should complete the tasks before due date. I have learned different skills in this subject such as priorities teams meeting to discuss the challenges that we were facing. However, working with the Australian Defence force gives me a great pleasure to understand more deeply the organization, and their challenges. As I and my team were giving to present a challenges Australia is facing today with the Illicit wildlife trade. In my research, I have developed an understanding of the topic, as well as I never expected that Australian government take this matter seriously. I have become more professional of how the organisation works and how they deal when they face challenges, such as enhancing legal measures and raising sanctions against wildlife trade.

I am a young professional seeking a career focused on delivering excellence in customer service. My customer-driven attention to detail, combined with the communication skills and knowledge I have developed during my studies at Macquarie University and internship at Macquarie Bank. I am looking to progress my career in a challenging role that will allow me to contribute to achieving team goals and personal development.

Communication: Strong communication skills gained working in the retail sector, hospitality, my internship with Macquarie Bank, and from university group presentations and written assignments. I am able to communicate clearly and effectively in multiple languages.

Teamwork: Developed strong ability to work as a part of a team, evidenced by participating in group-work assignments at university and at internship presentations.

Leadership: Led, motivated and supported refugee students from different backgrounds at Australian high schools as a volunteer in the LEAP UP program.

Research and Analysis: Prepared oral presentations and written documents in my role as intern at Macquarie Bank.

Please find the attached my resume for more information on my journey experiences in different sectors up to date regarding my above examples.