Write a 3 page Evaluation Essay after choosing a topic to evaluate that's based on your Pathway/Career interest. The Evaluation Essay must incorporate three pictures/images (you can use Google images)

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Evaluation Essay – This essay should be 3 pages or 750 words (5 paragraphs – Intro, 3 body paragraphs, and a Conclusion)

Thanks for the effort you put into this essay! Use the guidance below to make the following revisions. You’ll have (3) days to revise, and I'll regrade your paper then.

1. No quotes are needed in this paper.

2. Improve MLA formatting where needed: Use 12 font times new roman, double space between paragraphs, between your left heading and title, and between your title and introduction. Create a right header in 12 times new roman. See formatting video here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JJ7vub-T2ZM&t=75s. 

3. Create an original title.

4. Each paragraph should be 9-10 typed lines.

5. Indicate how your pathway relates to what you're evaluating in the introduction paragraph.

6. Ensure your topic sentences clearly align with the three criteria in your thesis. For ex. If “usability” is the first point in your thesis, then the first sentence in body paragraph one should mention usability. The same goes for the other two points in your thesis. You may need to either revise your topic sentences or your thesis.

7. This essay must incorporate three pictures or images to further illustrate your criteria (at the end of the paper).

8. Follow the Sample Evaluation Essay and Outline more closely. It contains all the required components.