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| ENG 215 – Appendix A: Peer Review Feedback Form 2 |
Appendix A: Peer Review Feedback Form 2 | |
Reviewer’s Name: | Date:2-26-2017 __ |
Writer’s Assigned #: _ | |
Course:_Eng215___ | Section:__016-1172-001 |
Assignment 4: Persuasive Paper Part 2: Solution and Advantages
Peer reviews should provide feedback to a peer on the criteria expected in the paper. Follow these instructions:
Receive a classmate’s paper from your professor (in class if on-ground; by e-mail if online).
Copy the Peer Review Feedback Form from the Appendix.
Comment on all criteria, noting strengths and / or areas for improvement on the feedback form.
Provide completed Peer Review Feedback Form and classmate’s paper to your professor.
Note: On-ground students should submit the feedback form and paper to the professor during the class meeting in which the paper is reviewed; online students should submit the feedback form and paper to the professor via the Assignment Tab in the course shell.
Criteria | + Strengths | Comments < Areas for Improvement |
Part 1 | ||
1. Revise, using feedback from the professor and classmates, your Persuasive Paper Part I - A Problem Exists. | | |
Part 2 | ||
2. Included a defensible, relevant thesis statement clearly in the first paragraph. | | The thesis statement is not clearly shown in the 1st paragraph. |
3. Explain a detailed, viable solution that supports your thesis. This should be one or two (1-2) paragraphs. | The first and second paragraph are good supports to your thesis. Good history. | |
4. State, explain, and support the first advantage (economic, social, political, environmental, social, equitable, ethical/moral, etc.) to your solution. This should be one or two (1-2) paragraphs. | The advantages are state clearly for an moral solution. | |
5. State, explain, and support the second advantage (economic, social, political, environmental, social, equitable, ethical/moral, etc.) to your solution. This should be one or two (1-2) paragraphs. | The advantages are stated clearly for an ethical solution. | |
6. State, explain, and support the third (and fourth if desired) advantage (economic, social, political, environment, social, equitable, ethical/moral, etc.) to your solution. This should be one or two (1-2) paragraphs. | | Could elaborate more. |
7. Use effective transitional words, phrases, and sentences. | | Could better transition from paragraph to paragraph |
8. Provide a concluding paragraph /transitional paragraph that summarizes the proposed solution and its advantages. | Conclusion was well structured | |
9. Develop a coherently structured paper with an introduction, body, and conclusion. | Paper was structured very well | Can develop a better introduction |
10. Use one or more rhetorical strategies (ethos, logos, pathos) to explain advantages. | | |
11. Support advantage claims with at least three (3) additional quality relevant references. Use at least six (6) total for Parts 1 & 2. | Use the proper amount of references. | |
12. Other | | |