Evaluation Essay Part 2
Feedback to Learner
I am awarding full points for the draft phase of this paper (you earned partial credit for a partial draft). This does not mean the paper currently reflects A work. Instead, see the rubric below for the current grade, rubric, and ideas for revision. Scroll past the rubric for additional tips for revision.
Scoring Rubric:
| Criteria | Points |
| Paper is 1 - 2 pages in length | 3/5 |
| Paper provides a criticism of a film, television show, album,work of art, or piece of literature. | 15/25 |
| Paper provides valid arguments for why you believe the work is,or is not, worth experiencing. | 10/25 |
| Paper is free of spelling and grammar errors | 3/5 |
| Total | 31/60 |
For revisions for the final paper work on the following:
Content: Work on fully developing the how and why supporting evidence of your criteria. Work on showing the audience how this particular criteria demonstrates why the piece is good or bad. Off specific evidence and examples to support each criteria.
Organization-work on the overall structure including 5 part essay structure, with introduction, thesis statement and overview of criteria or three main points, body with at least 3 main points, conclusion, and transitions.
Language. Work on spelling, grammar, and structural distractions. Work on APA reference page and in text citations.
