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ENG 215 – Appendix A: Peer Review Feedback Form 1

Appendix A: Peer Review Feedback Form 1
Reviewer’s Name: _	Date: __
Writer’s Assigned #: _
Course:____	Section:__

Assignment 3: Persuasive Paper Part 1: A Problem Exists

Peer reviews should provide feedback to a peer on the criteria expected in the paper. Follow these instructions:

Receive a classmate’s paper from your professor (in class if on-ground; by e-mail if online).
Copy the Peer Review Feedback Form from the Appendix.
Comment on all criteria, noting strengths and / or areas for improvement on the feedback form.
Provide completed Peer Review Feedback Form and classmate’s paper to your professor.

Note: On-ground students should submit the feedback form and paper to the professor during the class meeting in which the paper is reviewed; online students should submit the feedback form and paper to the professor via the Assignment Tab in the course shell.

Criteria	+ Strengths	Comments < Areas for Improvement
1. Provide an appropriate title and an interesting opening paragraph to appeal to your stated audience (appeal with logic, ethics, or emotion).	The student provided well defined title that which followed by an opening paragraph full with sense of humor. It covered the whole “advantages of working from home” title. By this h/she described the scenario of people on believes traditionally and how they carry out activities.	The work is quite recommendable but the writer should emphasis on the logic emotions
2. Include a defensible, relevant thesis statement in the first paragraph. (With revised thesis statement.)	The writer actually put the thesis statement as the main support of the story whereby he/she clearly focused and used it to give the flow for the reader and mind preparedness.	To my understanding the work was carried at level best every part needed for thesis statement are is covered appropriately.
3. Describe the history and status of the issue and provide an overview of the problem(s) that need to be addressed. This should be one or two (1-2) paragraphs.	The writer seems to discuss the technological part of the home based related connections. Therefore there is no a spotted issue that is seen to be crucial to disruption since all minor problem are seen to be recoverable. The writers have discussed the technology connected factors with a good range of two paragraphs.	The writer should have done a research that would describe one major issue that would need quite a good attention to be dealt with and talk about it.
4. Explain the first problem (economic, social, political, environmental, complexity, inequity, ethical/moral, etc.) and provide support for your claims. This should be one or two (1- 2) paragraphs.	The writer explained the main aspects related to the ethical social, moral and environment where he addressed the involved of the community the government the (president Bush) and others. Therefore the claims are well elaborated in this juncture.	The work meets the quality for its strength, every portion from start to the end of description.
5. Explain the second problem (economic, social, political, environmental, complexity, inequity, ethical/moral, etc.) and provide support for your claims. This should be one or two (1-2) paragraphs.	The economy status of the states and entire global related moderation is seen in the thesis whereby the key features to the home based working is put in well description.	Good work done although the writer needed to have quoted the intercountry business correlation that act as major effect.
6. Explain the third problem (economic, social, political, environmental, complexity, inequity, ethical/moral, etc.) and provide support for your claims. This should be one or two (1-2) paragraphs.	The complexity issue that goes in hand with the technology as main focused by the writer on the social media claims and extra. The idea of addressing through this format is put at a best topic and with some paragraphs.	Excellent work in deed.
7. Use effective transitional words, phrases, and sentences throughout the paper.	Through the paper there is transitional of words and phrases which have brought about good flow of statements and given humor for the reader.	Everything done to the level based.
8. Provide a concluding paragraph that summarizes the stated problems and promises a solution.	The writer closes the work giving solution and recommendation of the advantages of working from home. The analysis with the other employment details.	There could be more supportive solution, the provide woone were just a few tofor support.
9. Develop a coherently structured paper with an introduction, body, and conclusion	The paper have followed the standard guidelines of APA format , coherent paragraphs, use of phrases	Best arranged and organized per academic guideline, quality work in deed.
10. Support claims with at least three (3) quality, relevant references. Use credible, academic sources available through Strayer University’s Resource Center.	Good work, cited and reference source is very supportive to the wrier idea thus at level best	Work followed the correct format just excellent.
11. Other	The work have good grammar and the language is simple and clear to the reader	Best work and very presenatble