assisnment 5

ENG 215 – Appendix A: Peer Review Feedback Form 2

Appendix A: Peer Review Feedback Form 2
Reviewer’s Name: _	Date: _24/02/2017_
Writer’s Assigned #: _
Course:____	Section:__IV

Assignment 4: Persuasive Paper Part 2: Solution and Advantages

Peer reviews should provide feedback to a peer on the criteria expected in the paper. Follow these instructions:

Receive a classmate’s paper from your professor (in class if on-ground; by e-mail if online).
Copy the Peer Review Feedback Form from the Appendix.
Comment on all criteria, noting strengths and / or areas for improvement on the feedback form.
Provide completed Peer Review Feedback Form and classmate’s paper to your professor.

Note: On-ground students should submit the feedback form and paper to the professor during the class meeting in which the paper is reviewed; online students should submit the feedback form and paper to the professor via the Assignment Tab in the course shell.

Criteria	+ Strengths	Comments < Areas for Improvement
Part 1
1. Revise, using feedback from the professor and classmates, your Persuasive Paper Part I - A Problem Exists.
Part 2
2. Included a defensible, relevant thesis statement clearly in the first paragraph.	The paragraph was relevant and but not defensive.	Should learn on how to defend a thesis
3. Explain a detailed, viable solution that supports your thesis. This should be one or two (1-2) paragraphs.	No detailed explanation.	Explanation should be clear with good examples.
4. State, explain, and support the first advantage (economic, social, political, environmental, social, equitable, ethical/moral, etc.) to your solution. This should be one or two (1-2) paragraphs.	The economic issue was supported, with good examples.	Should connect the examples to the present times.
5. State, explain, and support the second advantage (economic, social, political, environmental, social, equitable, ethical/moral, etc.) to your solution. This should be one or two (1-2) paragraphs.	The environmental advantages were well addressed to some degree.	The thesis needed to include the negative impact to the vicinity.
6. State, explain, and support the third (and fourth if desired) advantage (economic, social, political, environment, social, equitable, ethical/moral, etc.) to your solution. This should be one or two (1-2) paragraphs.	There was well explained political issues.	The information was given in in more than three paragraphs, hence there is need to improve on how to express the message in not more than two paragraphs.
7. Use effective transitional words, phrases, and sentences.	The phrases were well used.	Should improve on using the correct sense.
8. Provide a concluding paragraph /transitional paragraph that summarizes the proposed solution and its advantages.	The was a conclusion statement.	The statement was mixed with more examples with did not summarize proposed advantages. Should improve on how summary is done.
9. Develop a coherently structured paper with an introduction, body, and conclusion.	The paper had all the required parts.	The paper was not coherent.
10. Use one or more rhetorical strategies (ethos, logos, pathos) to explain advantages.	No use of rhetorical strategies.	Should learn on how rhetoric strategies are used.
11. Support advantage claims with at least three (3) additional quality relevant references. Use at least six (6) total for Parts 1 & 2.	Only one refence was given	Need to improve on the use of references.
12. Other	The paper had no title.	Always a title should be given