Attached is my in class essay. we have to re write this in top quality, by the guidlines in the instructions. 5 pages only. well developed

ELCB 0870

January 27, 2017

Major Assignment #1

Final Draft based on Practice In-Class Write #1

Due Date: Final Draft- Wednesday February 8, 2017

Today you have received back your first practice in class write. This grade will be averaged into other homework and quiz grades (as will the grade of the second practice in class write). In addition, this is the basis for your first major assignment. You will consider this a first draft, and rewrite it, reflecting the necessary corrections and including additional information if needed.

First, note and correct the problems as indicated on the editing key. Then do some research to find support for your opinion. You need to include at least two outside sources; no more than one source should be electronic.

Be sure your final draft includes a title, an introductory paragraph (that contains your thesis statement) and a concluding paragraph that restates your main idea. As mentioned above, in addition to the body paragraph(s) created during the practice essay, your final draft will also include support for your opinion from two outside sources.

Since this is a major assignment, papers should be typed and adhere to appropriate academic format (see syllabus). Please underline your thesis statement, and write your topic sentences in bold. This is not standard academic practice, but it is a requirement for this class. Papers turned in without these directives will be reduced in score.

There is a CLB tutor available to help you review your work. I strongly advise you to sign up for a session with the tutor to go over your drafts. Schedules go up on Wednesdays; don’t wait long to sign up for a time slot, or there may be none left. Remember, this is free help available to you. Take advantage of it!