Mid term and rivse a paper

Revise the following message and submit an electronic copy of your revised letter to the dropbox by the beginning of class on Tuesday, 28 March.

Possible Points: 3

127 Redwood Road
Menomonie, WI 54751
March 23, 2017

The Osiris Paper Shredder Company
Customer Relations
100 State Street
Melrose, ID  30957

Dear Customer Relations Supervisor:

I am enclosing one of the broken parts from my new paper shredder, 
(it had a yellow extension with a red handle), was 
thrown out by my secretary who got sick of staring at it while I was busy looking
for your warranty.  The red handle was broken right in two, believe me.
I really appreciate your guarantee to replace broken parts.  And I hope that you 
will make an allowance for my secretary's having thrown out the other broken
part instead of understanding that we had to save it.
Thank you very much.
Sincerely,

Don Schroader