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Oscar: Thank you for submitting the rough draft of your literary analysis! You have an excellent start; you have a clearly defined thesis statement, you have three specific main points and your paper is organized well. Two suggestions, though: when I ran a Turnitin report, matches popped up from Encyclopedia.com. If this was used as a source, it should be cited. Also, when paraphrasing, all of the words need to be changed, but Turnitin showed many of the words in certain sentences and phrases were not. Make sure this is changed before the final draft. In addition, make sure you proofread for grammar and fix your in-text citations. Please review my marginal comments and let me know if you have any questions.