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Paper Title: Stephanie hicks Literary Analysis No. of Pages: 150 Paper Style: APA Paper Type: Other Taken English? Yes English as Second Language? No Feedback Areas: Sentence Structure, Focus/Thesis Statement Paper Goals: Literary Analysis Draft Proofing Summary:

Hi Stephanie, I’m Siobhan, your composition tutor for the Writing Center. I have reviewed your submission and have several suggestions that will help you revise. Please feel free to contact us through a live chat session with any follow-up questions or for any clarification.

Below, you will find a revision plan along with margin comments within your paper. Use my suggestions as a starting point for the revision process. Also, please note that I have not edited or proofread the entire draft for minor errors, but rather, focused on overall concerns such as idea development. For a complete look at your grammar and punctuation, please use the Grammarly software available under “Writing Center” in your classroom.

You have made interesting points in your essay to continue developing into your literary analysis!

For your revisions, I suggest focusing on:

1. Try to convey your literary argument thesis in single sentence structure. Analyze the character's motivations and decisions, and whether the actions fit together or contradict each other. Your thesis will guide your topic development, as each paragraph will focus on discussing one specific key point from your thesis.

2. Focus your paragraph structures on one single idea in order to promote the most organized and effective topic development. Begin your body paragraphs with topical sentences expressed in your own words to address the focus of the whole discussion, which will reflect a specific key point addressed in your thesis statement. The topical sentence of the paragraph will serve as a mini thesis to structure each paragraph. Use the PIE method for every body paragraph in terms of establishing a clear Point and providing supportive Information, followed up with an Explanation (where you fully analyze your point). Check out this link for more help: http://tinyurl.com/zaxrn9x. You should also be sure to integrate your research into your paper by following the ICE method for any information that you’ve included from a source. ICE stands for Introduce the point, Cite research evidence, and Explain the meaning and significance of the information. Review this link for more details: http://tinyurl.com/hzhqgj6 Review this helpful guide to develop your literary analysis: http://tinyurl.com/haz6wjh Good luck in the course, and I hope we can help you with your next assignment.

Siobhan Writing Consultant page 1 / 7 Proofed Paper: ntp220832 - Wed Apr 26 14:00:08 EDT 2017 page 2 / 7 Proofed Paper: ntp220832 - Wed Apr 26 14:00:08 EDT 2017 Try to convey your literary argument thesis in single sentence structure. Analyze the character's motivations and decisions, and whether the actions fit together or contradict each other. Your thesis will guide your topic development, as each paragraph will focus on discussing one specific key point from your thesis.Incorporate quotations fluently into your existing discussions to support your literary argument. Explain the meaning of direct quotes and be sure to fully explain how the quotation connects with your argument. page 3 / 7 Proofed Paper: ntp220832 - Wed Apr 26 14:00:08 EDT 2017 These sound like interesting points of analysis that respond to the prompt! Continue developing these ideas with citations from the text to support these claims. Explain to the reader how Jackson has the capacity to discover something positive in a negative situation. Why does Jackson hold this perspective, and what is the significance of these points in terms of your literary argument? Try to convey this message more clearly so that the reader can understand the point you are making. You will be more able to establish and explain your argument about the story when you write clearly and concisely. Always try to convey your messages in simple and direct statements.

The best academic writing is clear and straightforward because that allows all potential readers of your essay to understand all of your ideas and messages. This seems to be your thesis statement because you are conveying a specific argument about the text. If this is your analysis of the story, then you would focus on this argument throughout your whole essay. page 4 / 7 Proofed Paper: ntp220832 - Wed Apr 26 14:00:08 EDT 2017 Fully incorporate all quotations so that they are introduced and followed-up with an explanation and analysis of their meaning.

This will help to be sure that the reader understands how the quote connects to your point. Try to convey your analysis a bit more directly with specific details and word choices that express your intended messages.

Conclude your essay with a paragraph that briefly summarizes the key points you have discussed, and reiterate your thesis statement. page 5 / 7 Proofed Paper: ntp220832 - Wed Apr 26 14:00:08 EDT 2017 Check your complete citation with this link:

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