Paper Rewrite Apa

These are the commits that need to be address in the rewrite.

1. How about including an ingredients list and also a tools list?

2. Should they wash their hands first?

3. Couldn't the troop leader handle this in advance?

4. While that is good information, this age group responds well to definite instructions. 1/3 cup of specific juice, 1/2 cup of specific yogurt, etc.

5. How might you simplify this so that a child can follow the instructions clearly?