Writing a proposal essay

Purpose:

students familiar with the important of the GYM and its rule in keeping them physically healthy and fit. However, many of them find its very hard and difficult to go to the GYM, after long day at college, especially if the GYM not close by. Therefore, the purpose of this proposal to illustrate the benefits and advantages of bringing the GYM to the dorm (main campus hall).

Summary:

15 minutes working out sometimes better than not working out all. Far located GYM makes the idea of going back and forth from the GYM to dorm seems to be undesirable. Thus, bringing the GYM to the door will be more efficient and advantageous.

Introduction:

Having a healthy, fit, and perfect body was always obsession for people, since ancient times. Even though on that time, only small percentages of people were truly aware of this concept, as they were busy on other aspect of their life’s which they thought it was much more important, in addition they were lacking the place in which they can go to maintain such healthy body. However, in recent years more people became more aware, and knowledgeable about having healthy body, and how it reflects on their life`s, where the idea of the GYM came up.

The GYM is a place, typically a private club, providing a range of facilities designed to improve and maintain physically fitness and health. For most of the students going to the GYM seems to be interesting, but for others it is a must and very important, as a part of their daily life routine.

For a student with busy and stressful academic life such as, attending lectures, staying late at the library studying for an exam, or doing a home work. Making a decision to go to GYM is very critical, especially if the GYM is located far from the college which might make students prefer going home resting over the GYM. Thus, an idea came up on having onsite GYM.

Having onsite GYM used by many of big and famous firms. For example, Chick-Fil-A has a complete wellness center, equipped with cardio and weighs machines, and they even have a basketball court, as well as for Verizon, Herbalife and apple. If these companies realized the important of onsite GYM and its influence on the productivity, creativity, and efficiency on their employees, by providing them a place to keep them physically healthy and to release after work stress. I believe we can do the same for the students by providing onsite GYM too.

The criteria that I am using to evaluate the outcome are satisfactory and efficient.