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The Cause of Extreme Heat

Humanity is selfish. We are killing all the animals on earth. But we kill all the animals on earth, we will also suppress ourselves. Because ecosystems require different creatures to keep a balance, we can not survive in a world of only human beings. Why do I say that? Because of the extreme heat. Earth's polar glaciers are melting, some animals are losing their homes. Some plants may not survive because they can not adapt to the speed of global warming. Not all of the effects are due to human causes of earth's rotation and revolution may have a certain impact on the temperature, but the human is the biggest reason of the extreme heat. We are the leader of all creatures in the world because we are Sm cut than the other animal. We cut the cut the forest make yourself a place to live or made of wood, boats, tools, and so on, we use fossil fuels to power our cars, and the number of rapid growth. We also removed a lot of grass for planting crops. However, all of this things Which help people get a better life are the causes of the extreme heat. We should stop do these things, the earth does not only belong to the human, we should protect ours home.

First, cutting down the trees is one of the important reason which caused extreme heat. People are cut the trees to provide people with more living space and use wood building the houses or make the boat, we also use it to made some daily necessities, like bed, chair, etc. Certainly, this things make our life become more colorful and interesting. but also take the extreme heat to the human. First, most people know photosynthesis of the trees can turn carbon dioxide into oxygen and help to rain. Cutting the fores will result in increased carbon dioxide content in the air and make the temperature rise. So, we should stop cutting down trees.

Second, fossil fuels also bring the extreme heat, fossil fuels include oil, coal and natural gas, people are using it in many different ways. Fossil fuels take many conveniences to people, We can use oil as a driving force and use natural gas power generation. However, Fossil fuels also take many influences to people. Combustion of fossil fuels to the environment is a serious problem in today's world because fossil fuels in the combustion process will be released carbon dioxide, etc. These substances will directly harm humans and animals, resulting in acid rain, and the formation of the greenhouse effect. For this reason, I feel is one of the most influential for extreme heat is the factories, factories need use a lot of fossil fuels and will discharge large amounts of carbon dioxide and toxic gases that very influential the impact on the temperature great and environment.

Finally, population also is a cause of the extreme heat. Nowadays, the world population is nearly 7.2 billion, every day we have to breathe. Although this not the biggest influencing factor, the point is that we need to control the population. Even one person only create very small amount of carbon dioxide each day, but 7.2 billion people it may become a problem.

Cutting down the tree, use a lot of fossil fuels, and rapidly growing population all of these things will affect temperature and take the extreme heat for us. In conclusion, we cannot continue do these things, I think we can find many ways to reduce extreme heat. We can try to find a better material use build the house, and minimize the use of fossil fuels. We can plant a large area of trees try to restore the original appearance of the forest that also can allow animals to have habitat. Moreover, we can control the population, family planning. So, these all the things are causes of the extreme weather, we should pay more attention in this regard