Be sure that your final draft research paper has a clear thesis and appropriate support for your argument. Remember, you are writing for an academic audience of experts in your discipline or field

Be sure that your final draft research paper has a clear thesis and appropriate support for your argument. Remember, you are writing for an academic audience of experts in your discipline or field, so ensure you have followed the right conventions for providing support. While you are not expected to be an expert yourself, your paper should be well-supported with sources from your field. Proper use of quotes, summaries, and paraphrasing is essential, and in-text citations and references based on APA are required.

Your research essay should be 1000 to 1250 words, include a strong thesis, and incorporate at least five scholarly sources. Your introduction should state your thesis and define the key points that support your thesis. Body paragraphs should support your argued thesis. The conclusion should summarize and leave the reader accepting your thesis.

-Does your introductory paragraph should include your thesis. 

-Does each body paragraph support the argument made in the thesis?

-Do body paragraphs reflect the support areas identified in the introduction?

-Does each paragraph contain sources and evidence, and is information appropriately quoted, summarized, paraphrased, and cited?

-Does each paragraph contain a topic sentence, with all other sentences supporting that topic sentence?

-Are there transitions between paragraphs that move the reader from one support area to the next?

Be sure that your final draft has a clear thesis and appropriate support for your argument. Remember, you are writing for an academic audience of experts in your discipline or field, so ensure you have followed the right conventions for providing support. While you are not expected to be an expert yourself, your paper should be well-supported with sources from your field. Proper use of quotes, summaries, and paraphrasing is essential, and in-text citations and references based on APA are required.

Your research essay should be 1000 to 1250 words, include a strong thesis, and incorporate at least five scholarly sources. Your goal is to draft an interesting and engaging paper that is both informative and persuasive about the issue, topic, or question you chose for your research topic. Your introduction should state your thesis and define the key points that support your thesis. Body paragraphs should support your argued thesis. The conclusion should summarize and leave the reader accepting your thesis.

**I have attached the draft research paper that needs some modifications to go with the information above. there are recommendations for change added onto the pdf file.