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I have peer reviews discussions to write. Please read instructions below. I have also attached 2 papers from the 2 classmates work I would like to review. I also attached the article we had to write the critique essay on just in case you need to refer to it.

Very thoroughly and carefully review the drafts of at least two classmates, posting your reviews as replies to their draft posts.  Please carefully review the Week 4, Discussion 2 area to prepare for peer review, and please refer to the Essay Assignment grading criteria and textbook resources for areas that you should scrutinize. I suggest that you provide at least one thorough, detailed, constructive comment for each main area of the rubric and point to a specific example from the peer's draft to explain each comment and suggestion. Again, do provide detailed, constructive feedback.

It is most important that you refer to specific criteria from Assignment as you share your feedback.  Please review the following resources to help prepare you to write an effective peer critique:

• Conducting Peer Reviews from the Writer’s Handbook from University of Wisconsin, Madison:

          http://writing.wisc.edu/Handbook/PeerReviews.html

• Revision Questions for Peer Collaborators from McGraw-Hill

          http://www.mhhe.com/mayfieldpub/maner/resources/peer3.htm

• Editing Questions for Peer Collaborators from McGraw Hill

          http://www.mhhe.com/mayfieldpub/maner/resources/peer4.htm

• Do’s and Don’ts of Peer Evaluations from McGraw Hill

     http://www.mhhe.com/mayfieldpub/maner/resources/peer5.htm

Please examine the above web sites and find at least two ideas you will use while you do your peer review.