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Can you please proof read my essay. Thanks According my professor I need to work on these aspects. 

A solid effort with your expository essay draft, about PTSD with strong content and supportive details. Your writing shows steady progress. When writing your final draft, check for the basic components: required title page with a Running head, engaging title, introduction with the thesis statement, well-developed and supported body paragraphs with your topic sentences and details, a conclusion, and a References page. Be sure your paper contains a summary type of conclusion where you emphasize your key points. Specifically, this is where you state what you want readers to take away from your essay. Watch, too, your basic mechanics and proofread in order to detect and eliminate all mechanical flaws. Please review the comments I entered on your paper for help with issues that need attention. A basic guideline to follow is to use commas and other forms of punctuation only when you know a particular grammar or punctuation rule dictating such use. You might want to print out the previous Unit Lessons that contained punctuation rules and examples to have a handy guide for future reference. You are on the right track so please continue on.