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add ethos and in text citations teachers cmments below *See the comments I left in your draft. You need to work on providing citations for the information you provide in this report. Right now, you
add ethos and in text citations
teachers cmments below
*See the comments I left in your draft. You need to work on providing citations for the information you provide in this report. Right now, you are missing a lot of ethos in your report because you didn't use very many in text citations**
*Your introduction needs to have a clear thesis statement that argues for increased awareness of the issue*
*You need citations for these sources. Any time you refer to information that is not your own, cite it.
*Your final will need a conclusion which should include a summary of your main points and resources for your readers to get more information on organizations doing work to solve the issue
follow APA format for the references
