all that has to be done is to edit this paper I have attached with these following things below Make sure all six of these things are done just read the paper and fix these issues below1.Annotations:

all that has to be done is to edit this paper I have attached with these following things below 

Make sure all six of these things are done just read the paper and fix these issues below

1.Annotations: Evaluation of the Article: It is bias to only report on studies that 

2.Support the hypothesis. Delete biased wording about how the study will be used because you agree with what they say. 

3.Annotations: Comparison to Other Sources: the studies were largely not compared to each other  

4.Annotations: Limitations: It appears that you only covered one limitation of a couple studies. This should be done with all of them. 

5.Articulation of Response: don't restate entire titles in your text. Use APA citations. Authors last names and year published. 

6. Avoid the use of personal pronouns. See the 'Writing Expectations' class announcement for details!!