assignment

this is the whole information

and this is the essay that I did and this is what the teacher said 

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Omar, this essay is based on research and the use of sources, which are not acceptable in this course.  This is a PERSONAL CRITICAL THINKING ESSAY.  You will need to redo Essay #3 just using your imagination.  And when you resend it, please give it a NEW NAME similar to this so I don't lose it in my digital files:  

It took me awhile because I was researching your use of sources.  

Thank you.

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so I have my essay and also the information in another file

who can fix my essay ?